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| − | * ... that '''[[Galco's Soda Pop Stop]]''' ''(pictured)'' in [[Los Angeles]] carries over 700 different hard-to-find [[soft drink|sodas]], but not [[Coca-Cola]] or [[Pepsi]]? <small>Source: ''[http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-4189264/Willy-Wonka-soda-John-Nese-Galcos-700-varieties-pop.html Daily Mail]'' and ''[http://www.papermag.com/inside-galcos-soda-pop-stop-las-indie-soda-mecca-1426764978.html PAPER]'')</small> | + | * <s>... that '''[[Galco's Soda Pop Stop]]''' ''(pictured)'' in [[Los Angeles]] carries over 700 different hard-to-find [[soft drink|sodas]], but not [[Coca-Cola]] or [[Pepsi]]? <small>Source: ''[http://www.dailymail.co.uk/news/article-4189264/Willy-Wonka-soda-John-Nese-Galcos-700-varieties-pop.html Daily Mail]'' and ''[http://www.papermag.com/inside-galcos-soda-pop-stop-las-indie-soda-mecca-1426764978.html PAPER]'')</small></s> |
| + | ** ... that '''[[Galco's Soda Pop Stop]]''' ''(pictured)'' in [[Los Angeles]] carries over 700 different hard-to-find [[soft drink|sodas]]? <small>Source: ''[https://boingboing.net/2016/06/01/i-will-get-fat-eating-retro-ca.html Boing Boing]'' and ''[https://books.google.com/books?id=gH92pWMsi78C&pg=PA41#v=onepage&q&f=false Positioning for Professionals]'')</small> | ||
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Jason Chee (para-athlete)|Jason Chee (para-athlete)]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Jason Chee (para-athlete)|Jason Chee (para-athlete)]] | ||
<small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:Michael Barera|Michael Barera]] ([[User talk:Michael Barera|talk]]). Self-nominated at 04:10, 9 January 2018 (UTC).</small> | <small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:Michael Barera|Michael Barera]] ([[User talk:Michael Barera|talk]]). Self-nominated at 04:10, 9 January 2018 (UTC).</small> | ||
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| − | + | :* Thanks, [[User:Nomader|Nomader]]. I believe I've addressed your concerns now. The original remark about Coke and Pepsi was misleading, as Galco's appears to stock Mexican-made (with sugar cane) versions of both sodas, but not the "traditional" American versions of these drinks. Therefore, I think it is simpler and clearer to simply omit this from the hook. Please let me know if this needs more work. Thanks again for the review! [[User:Michael Barera|Michael Barera]] ([[User talk:Michael Barera|talk]]) 21:24, 10 January 2018 (UTC) | |
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Galco's Soda Pop Stop
... that Galco's Soda Pop Stop (pictured) in Los Angeles carries over 700 different hard-to-find sodas, but not Coca-Cola or Pepsi? Source: Daily Mail and PAPER)- ... that Galco's Soda Pop Stop (pictured) in Los Angeles carries over 700 different hard-to-find sodas? Source: Boing Boing and Positioning for Professionals)
- Reviewed: Jason Chee (para-athlete)
Moved to mainspace by Michael Barera (talk). Self-nominated at 04:10, 9 January 2018 (UTC).
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- Thanks, Nomader. I believe I've addressed your concerns now. The original remark about Coke and Pepsi was misleading, as Galco's appears to stock Mexican-made (with sugar cane) versions of both sodas, but not the "traditional" American versions of these drinks. Therefore, I think it is simpler and clearer to simply omit this from the hook. Please let me know if this needs more work. Thanks again for the review! Michael Barera (talk) 21:24, 10 January 2018 (UTC)
