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* ... that [[Xavier Bettel]] became the first [[European Union]] leader to marry someone of the same sex when he married '''[[Gauthier Destenay]]''' in 2015?  <small>Source: [https://www.theguardian.com/world/2015/may/15/luxembourg-prime-minister-eu-xavier-bettel-gauthier-destenay-gay-marriage] </small>
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* ... that [[Xavier Bettel]] became the first [[European Union]] leader to marry someone of the same sex when he married '''[[Gauthier Destenay]]''' ''(pictured)'' in 2015?  <small>Source: [https://www.theguardian.com/world/2015/may/15/luxembourg-prime-minister-eu-xavier-bettel-gauthier-destenay-gay-marriage] </small>
 
* '''ALT1''' ... that [[Xavier Bettel]] became the first [[European Union]] leader to have a same sex marriage, with '''[[Gauthier Destenay]]''' ''(pictured)'' in  2015?   
 
* '''ALT1''' ... that [[Xavier Bettel]] became the first [[European Union]] leader to have a same sex marriage, with '''[[Gauthier Destenay]]''' ''(pictured)'' in  2015?   
  
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::* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Thanks for the reminder. New enough. Long enough. QPQ done. NPOV. Well-cited throughout. Interesting hook. The hook fact needs a citation at the end of the sentence, not just the end of the paragraph. Having "marry" and "married" in the same sentence seems a tad cumbersome, so I've suggested a shorter ALT1, which is still not perfect! [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) 01:20, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
 
::* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Thanks for the reminder. New enough. Long enough. QPQ done. NPOV. Well-cited throughout. Interesting hook. The hook fact needs a citation at the end of the sentence, not just the end of the paragraph. Having "marry" and "married" in the same sentence seems a tad cumbersome, so I've suggested a shorter ALT1, which is still not perfect! [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) 01:20, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
 
:::{{ping|Edwardx}} Thanks for the review. I have added the citation at the end of the sentence. ALT1 is good, though it sounds a little less 'hooky'. But I cannot think of a better way to modify the sentence so I think its okay to go ahead with that. I have also added a Public Domain image which was added to the page recently. Do look into the image and review it as well. [[User:Jupitus Smart|<b><span style="color:#f45342;">Jupitus</span> <span style="color:#05ad83"><i>Smart</i></span></b>]] 02:09, 5 June 2017 (UTC)  
 
:::{{ping|Edwardx}} Thanks for the review. I have added the citation at the end of the sentence. ALT1 is good, though it sounds a little less 'hooky'. But I cannot think of a better way to modify the sentence so I think its okay to go ahead with that. I have also added a Public Domain image which was added to the page recently. Do look into the image and review it as well. [[User:Jupitus Smart|<b><span style="color:#f45342;">Jupitus</span> <span style="color:#05ad83"><i>Smart</i></span></b>]] 02:09, 5 June 2017 (UTC)  
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:::: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thanks, [[User:Jupitus Smart|Jupitus Smart]]. Cite at end of sentence noted. I agree with your concerns about my ALT1 - hopefully someone further along in the process will be inspired to tweak your hook and make it even better. Image is suitably licensed for the front page. [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) 10:43, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 10:44, 5 June 2017

Gauthier Destenay

Gauthier Destenay
Gauthier Destenay

Created by Jupitus Smart (talk). Self-nominated at 12:34, 29 May 2017 (UTC).

  • REVIEW STARTED. New enough. Long enough. QPQ done. Edwardx (talk) 11:59, 1 June 2017 (UTC)
Template:Ping I hope you haven't forgotten about this. Jupitus Smart 15:24, 4 June 2017 (UTC)
  • File:Symbol question.svg Thanks for the reminder. New enough. Long enough. QPQ done. NPOV. Well-cited throughout. Interesting hook. The hook fact needs a citation at the end of the sentence, not just the end of the paragraph. Having "marry" and "married" in the same sentence seems a tad cumbersome, so I've suggested a shorter ALT1, which is still not perfect! Edwardx (talk) 01:20, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
Template:Ping Thanks for the review. I have added the citation at the end of the sentence. ALT1 is good, though it sounds a little less 'hooky'. But I cannot think of a better way to modify the sentence so I think its okay to go ahead with that. I have also added a Public Domain image which was added to the page recently. Do look into the image and review it as well. Jupitus Smart 02:09, 5 June 2017 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Thanks, Jupitus Smart. Cite at end of sentence noted. I agree with your concerns about my ALT1 - hopefully someone further along in the process will be inspired to tweak your hook and make it even better. Image is suitably licensed for the front page. Edwardx (talk) 10:43, 5 June 2017 (UTC)