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* ... that the former musical director for the [[Nine Network]], '''[[Geoff Harvey]]''' grew his beard as result of losing a bet in 1965 to [[Don Lane]] on a football match? <small>Source: https://trove.nla.gov.au/newspaper/article/51604076</small> | * ... that the former musical director for the [[Nine Network]], '''[[Geoff Harvey]]''' grew his beard as result of losing a bet in 1965 to [[Don Lane]] on a football match? <small>Source: https://trove.nla.gov.au/newspaper/article/51604076</small> | ||
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Rajeev Nayyar|Rajeev Nayyar]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Rajeev Nayyar|Rajeev Nayyar]] | ||
<small>Created by [[User:Ianblair23|Ianblair23]] ([[User talk:Ianblair23|talk]]). Self-nominated at 03:40, 29 December 2018 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Ianblair23|Ianblair23]] ([[User talk:Ianblair23|talk]]). Self-nominated at 03:40, 29 December 2018 (UTC).</small> | ||
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:::::::::Thanks {{U|Yoninah}}. I have updated the article. Cheers – [[User:Ianblair23|Ianblair23]] [[User talk:Ianblair23|(talk)]] 10:54, 22 January 2019 (UTC) | :::::::::Thanks {{U|Yoninah}}. I have updated the article. Cheers – [[User:Ianblair23|Ianblair23]] [[User talk:Ianblair23|(talk)]] 10:54, 22 January 2019 (UTC) | ||
::::::::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thank you. I moved the subject to the front of the ALT2 hook. Hook ref verified and cited inline. ALT2 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 11:12, 22 January 2019 (UTC) | ::::::::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thank you. I moved the subject to the front of the ALT2 hook. Hook ref verified and cited inline. ALT2 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 11:12, 22 January 2019 (UTC) | ||
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Latest revision as of 06:48, 5 February 2019
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:48, 5 February 2019 (UTC)
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Geoff Harvey
Geoff Harvey
- ... that the former musical director for the Nine Network, Geoff Harvey grew his beard as result of losing a bet in 1965 to Don Lane on a football match? Source: https://trove.nla.gov.au/newspaper/article/51604076
- Reviewed: Rajeev Nayyar
Created by Ianblair23 (talk). Self-nominated at 03:40, 29 December 2018 (UTC).
- Lua error: expandTemplate: template "y" does not exist.
16px Returned from prep. The hook is all right, but the article has a lot of close paraphrasing from the trove.nla.gov source. See Earwig's. Please rewrite and reorganize these sentences in your own words. Yoninah (talk) 22:53, 3 January 2019 (UTC)
- 16px Note: that source is cited no less that 8 times, and none of the close paraphrasing is passed off as the contributor's own ideas. Just saying --DannyS712 (talk) 23:57, 3 January 2019 (UTC)
- Hi Template:U and Template:U, I have addressed this issue. Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 01:26, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
- Thank you for taking care of the close paraphrasing, Template:U. To be honest, the more I look at this hook, the more trivial it sounds. People outside Australia will have no idea what he looks like, beard or not, especially if we put this in a non-image slot (which I was planning). He was at Nine Network for nearly four decades; is this the best we can say about him? Yoninah (talk) 18:07, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
- Hi Template:U and Template:U, I have addressed this issue. Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 01:26, 4 January 2019 (UTC)
- Well Template:U, we could change it to ALT1
... that the former musical director for the Nine Network, Geoff Harvey composed the theme songs for The Sullivans, A Current Affair, Today and Sunday? - Or something a bit more quirky ALT2 ... that Geoff Harvey, former musical director for the Nine Network, composed the theme song for The Sullivans for his wife's cousin's wedding? (not yet added to article but sourced here)
- Let me know what you think. Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 23:05, 5 January 2019 (UTC)
- Hi Template:U, any furthers thoughts on the above? – Ianblair23 (talk) 04:26, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks for the reminder. But I won't be able to think about this until after Shabbat. Yoninah (talk) 12:26, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
- Template:Ping ALT2 looks like it will have wider reader interest. Could you add it to the article? Yoninah (talk) 00:57, 21 January 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks Template:U. I have updated the article. Cheers – Ianblair23 (talk) 10:54, 22 January 2019 (UTC)
- Thanks for the reminder. But I won't be able to think about this until after Shabbat. Yoninah (talk) 12:26, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
- Hi Template:U, any furthers thoughts on the above? – Ianblair23 (talk) 04:26, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
- Well Template:U, we could change it to ALT1
