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:::::Source for ALT1 - <small> [http://ur.umich.edu/9697/Oct15_96/artcl08.htm University of Michigan obituary] </small> | :::::Source for ALT1 - <small> [http://ur.umich.edu/9697/Oct15_96/artcl08.htm University of Michigan obituary] </small> | ||
:::{{ping|Crosstemplejay}} Withdrew my original hook, as ALT0a is much better worded. Submitted ALT1. --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 11:03, 24 July 2017 (UTC) | :::{{ping|Crosstemplejay}} Withdrew my original hook, as ALT0a is much better worded. Submitted ALT1. --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 11:03, 24 July 2017 (UTC) | ||
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| + | [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Will leave the closer to choose which hook is better, cant decide. Nice work Doug Coldwell. [[User:Crosstemplejay|<font color="blue">'''Cross'''</font><font color="blue">'''Temple'''</font>]][[user talk:crosstemplejay|<font color="red">''' Jay'''</font>]] 08:57, 25 July 2017 (UTC) | ||
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George Huebner
... that George Huebner was the chief engineer who developed the motor of first car powered with a gas turbine engine that was driven across the United States?
Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self-nominated at 11:12, 21 July 2017 (UTC).
- In my opinion, the hook makes for difficult reading. I suggest rewording it like below.
- ALT0a:... that George Huebner was the chief engineer who developed the motor of first gas turbine engine car which was driven across the United States?CrossTemple Jay 08:52, 24 July 2017 (UTC)
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- ALT1 :... that George Huebner is known as the 'father of the automotive gas turbine engine'?
- Source for ALT1 - University of Michigan obituary
- Template:Ping Withdrew my original hook, as ALT0a is much better worded. Submitted ALT1. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:03, 24 July 2017 (UTC)
16px New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Will leave the closer to choose which hook is better, cant decide. Nice work Doug Coldwell. CrossTemple Jay 08:57, 25 July 2017 (UTC)
