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:* In my opinion, the hook makes for difficult reading. I suggest rewording it like below. | :* In my opinion, the hook makes for difficult reading. I suggest rewording it like below. | ||
| − | ::* '''ALT0a''':... that '''[[George Huebner]]''' was the chief engineer who developed the motor of first gas turbine engine car which was driven across the United States?[[User:Crosstemplejay|< | + | ::* '''ALT0a''':... that '''[[George Huebner]]''' was the chief engineer who developed the motor of first gas turbine engine car which was driven across the United States?[[User:Crosstemplejay|<span style="color:blue;">'''Cross'''</span><span style="color:blue;">'''Temple'''</span>]][[user talk:crosstemplejay|<span style="color:red;">''' Jay'''</span>]] 08:52, 24 July 2017 (UTC) |
::::Source - <small> [https://www.newspapers.com/clip/12493411/corsicana_daily_sun/ First Car Powered With Gas Turbine Engine Ends Transcontinental Trip] </small> | ::::Source - <small> [https://www.newspapers.com/clip/12493411/corsicana_daily_sun/ First Car Powered With Gas Turbine Engine Ends Transcontinental Trip] </small> | ||
:::* '''ALT1''' :... that '''[[George Huebner]]''' is known as the 'father of the automotive gas turbine engine'? | :::* '''ALT1''' :... that '''[[George Huebner]]''' is known as the 'father of the automotive gas turbine engine'? | ||
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:::{{ping|Crosstemplejay}} Withdrew my original hook, as ALT0a is much better worded. Submitted ALT1. --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 11:03, 24 July 2017 (UTC) | :::{{ping|Crosstemplejay}} Withdrew my original hook, as ALT0a is much better worded. Submitted ALT1. --[[User:Doug Coldwell|Doug Coldwell]] ([[User talk:Doug Coldwell|talk]]) 11:03, 24 July 2017 (UTC) | ||
| − | [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Will leave the closer to choose which hook is better, cant decide. Nice work Doug Coldwell. [[User:Crosstemplejay|< | + | [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ done. Will leave the closer to choose which hook is better, cant decide. Nice work Doug Coldwell. [[User:Crosstemplejay|<span style="color:blue;">'''Cross'''</span><span style="color:blue;">'''Temple'''</span>]][[user talk:crosstemplejay|<span style="color:red;">''' Jay'''</span>]] 08:57, 25 July 2017 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> |
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- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Alex ShihTalk 12:26, 26 July 2017 (UTC)
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George Huebner
... that George Huebner was the chief engineer who developed the motor of first car powered with a gas turbine engine that was driven across the United States?
Created by Doug Coldwell (talk). Self-nominated at 11:12, 21 July 2017 (UTC).
- In my opinion, the hook makes for difficult reading. I suggest rewording it like below.
- ALT0a:... that George Huebner was the chief engineer who developed the motor of first gas turbine engine car which was driven across the United States?CrossTemple Jay 08:52, 24 July 2017 (UTC)
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- ALT1 :... that George Huebner is known as the 'father of the automotive gas turbine engine'?
- Source for ALT1 - University of Michigan obituary
- Template:Ping Withdrew my original hook, as ALT0a is much better worded. Submitted ALT1. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 11:03, 24 July 2017 (UTC)
