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:::--[[User:Peter I. Vardy|Peter I. Vardy]] ([[User talk:Peter I. Vardy|talk]]) 16:41, 15 August 2014 (UTC)
 
:::--[[User:Peter I. Vardy|Peter I. Vardy]] ([[User talk:Peter I. Vardy|talk]]) 16:41, 15 August 2014 (UTC)
 
::::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I added a wikilink. Looks good. [[User:Staticshakedown|<font color="##990000" face="geneva" size="3"> static shakedown ʕ •ᴥ•ʔ</font>]] 19:15, 16 August 2014 (UTC)
 
::::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I added a wikilink. Looks good. [[User:Staticshakedown|<font color="##990000" face="geneva" size="3"> static shakedown ʕ •ᴥ•ʔ</font>]] 19:15, 16 August 2014 (UTC)
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:::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Staticshakedown}} did you check the online sources for close paraphrasing? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:46, 16 August 2014 (UTC)
 
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Gerald Westbury

  • ... that Gerald 'Charley' Westbury was one of the first cancer surgeons to develop procedures that would preserve function as well as give good survival rates?

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nominated at 16:23, 14 August 2014 (UTC).

  • Actually, maybe the only thing would be a hook worded a bit differently?
  • Alt1: ... that Gerald "Charley" Westbury was a cancer surgeon who developed procedures that minimized tissue removal and preserved muscle function?
  • Not sure that "minimized" is the correct word; maybe too string. How about:
--Peter I. Vardy (talk) 16:41, 15 August 2014 (UTC)