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::* Actually, maybe the only thing would be a hook worded a bit differently? | ::* Actually, maybe the only thing would be a hook worded a bit differently? | ||
* '''Alt1''': ... that '''[[Gerald Westbury|Gerald "Charley" Westbury]]''' was a cancer surgeon who developed procedures that minimized tissue removal and preserved muscle function? | * '''Alt1''': ... that '''[[Gerald Westbury|Gerald "Charley" Westbury]]''' was a cancer surgeon who developed procedures that minimized tissue removal and preserved muscle function? | ||
| − | ::*Not sure that "minimized" is the correct word; maybe too | + | ::*Not sure that "minimized" is the correct word; maybe too strong. How about: |
* '''Alt2''': ... that '''[[Gerald Westbury|Gerald "Charley" Westbury]]''' was a [[surgical oncology|cancer surgeon]] who developed procedures that reduced tissue removal and preserved muscle function? | * '''Alt2''': ... that '''[[Gerald Westbury|Gerald "Charley" Westbury]]''' was a [[surgical oncology|cancer surgeon]] who developed procedures that reduced tissue removal and preserved muscle function? | ||
:::--[[User:Peter I. Vardy|Peter I. Vardy]] ([[User talk:Peter I. Vardy|talk]]) 16:41, 15 August 2014 (UTC) | :::--[[User:Peter I. Vardy|Peter I. Vardy]] ([[User talk:Peter I. Vardy|talk]]) 16:41, 15 August 2014 (UTC) | ||
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Gerald Westbury
- ... that Gerald 'Charley' Westbury was one of the first cancer surgeons to develop procedures that would preserve function as well as give good survival rates?
- Reviewed: Frank Farley (psychologist)
Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nominated at 16:23, 14 August 2014 (UTC).
Article is new enough, long enough, I added some refs and checked the others, QPQ good. static shakedown ʕ •ᴥ•ʔ 15:46, 15 August 2014 (UTC)
- Actually, maybe the only thing would be a hook worded a bit differently?
- Alt1: ... that Gerald "Charley" Westbury was a cancer surgeon who developed procedures that minimized tissue removal and preserved muscle function?
- Not sure that "minimized" is the correct word; maybe too strong. How about:
- Alt2: ... that Gerald "Charley" Westbury was a cancer surgeon who developed procedures that reduced tissue removal and preserved muscle function?
- --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 16:41, 15 August 2014 (UTC)
I added a wikilink. Looks good. static shakedown ʕ •ᴥ•ʔ 19:15, 16 August 2014 (UTC)
Template:Ping did you check the online sources for close paraphrasing? Yoninah (talk) 20:46, 16 August 2014 (UTC)
- --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 16:41, 15 August 2014 (UTC)