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::* Actually, maybe the only thing would be a hook worded a bit differently?
 
::* Actually, maybe the only thing would be a hook worded a bit differently?
 
* '''Alt1''': ... that '''[[Gerald Westbury|Gerald "Charley" Westbury]]''' was a cancer surgeon who developed procedures that minimized tissue removal and preserved muscle function?
 
* '''Alt1''': ... that '''[[Gerald Westbury|Gerald "Charley" Westbury]]''' was a cancer surgeon who developed procedures that minimized tissue removal and preserved muscle function?
::*Not sure that "minimized" is the correct word; maybe too string.  How about:
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::*Not sure that "minimized" is the correct word; maybe too strong.  How about:
 
* '''Alt2''': ... that '''[[Gerald Westbury|Gerald "Charley" Westbury]]''' was a [[surgical oncology|cancer surgeon]] who developed procedures that reduced tissue removal and preserved muscle function?
 
* '''Alt2''': ... that '''[[Gerald Westbury|Gerald "Charley" Westbury]]''' was a [[surgical oncology|cancer surgeon]] who developed procedures that reduced tissue removal and preserved muscle function?
 
:::--[[User:Peter I. Vardy|Peter I. Vardy]] ([[User talk:Peter I. Vardy|talk]]) 16:41, 15 August 2014 (UTC)
 
:::--[[User:Peter I. Vardy|Peter I. Vardy]] ([[User talk:Peter I. Vardy|talk]]) 16:41, 15 August 2014 (UTC)

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Gerald Westbury

  • ... that Gerald 'Charley' Westbury was one of the first cancer surgeons to develop procedures that would preserve function as well as give good survival rates?

Created by Peter I. Vardy (talk). Self nominated at 16:23, 14 August 2014 (UTC).

  • Actually, maybe the only thing would be a hook worded a bit differently?
  • Alt1: ... that Gerald "Charley" Westbury was a cancer surgeon who developed procedures that minimized tissue removal and preserved muscle function?
  • Not sure that "minimized" is the correct word; maybe too strong. How about:
--Peter I. Vardy (talk) 16:41, 15 August 2014 (UTC)