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* ... that a sculpture, by [[Dudley Pratt]], of the god [[Neptune (mythology)|Neptune]] is situated along one of the parapets of '''[[Gerberding Hall]]'''?
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* <s>... that a sculpture, by [[Dudley Pratt]], of the god [[Neptune (mythology)|Neptune]] is situated along one of the parapets of '''[[Gerberding Hall]]'''?</s>
::'''ALT1''' ... that a sculpture of the god [[Neptune (mythology)|Neptune]] on one of the parapets of the [[University of Washington]]'s '''[[Gerberding Hall]]''' (''pictured'') represents [[oceanography]]?
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::'''ALT1''' <s>... that a sculpture of the god [[Neptune (mythology)|Neptune]] on one of the parapets of the [[University of Washington]]'s '''[[Gerberding Hall]]''' (''pictured'') represents [[oceanography]]?</s>
 
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:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Lake Manly]]
 
<small>Created by [[User:Chetsford|Chetsford]] ([[User talk:Chetsford|talk]]). Self-nominated at 00:00, 18 February 2018 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Chetsford|Chetsford]] ([[User talk:Chetsford|talk]]). Self-nominated at 00:00, 18 February 2018 (UTC).</small>
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:* Drive-by comment: I think you can do more with this hook. It's not clear where Gerberding Hall is. And it's interesting that Neptune represents the oceanography and fisheries sciences. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 00:48, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 
:* Drive-by comment: I think you can do more with this hook. It's not clear where Gerberding Hall is. And it's interesting that Neptune represents the oceanography and fisheries sciences. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 00:48, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
 
:::That's good feedback, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]]. I've put forward an ALT. [[User:Chetsford|Chetsford]] ([[User talk:Chetsford|talk]]) 05:40, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
 
:::That's good feedback, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]]. I've put forward an ALT. [[User:Chetsford|Chetsford]] ([[User talk:Chetsford|talk]]) 05:40, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
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::::*Thank you. I'll do a full review: New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. All images are freely licensed. QPQ done. But I think the hook should read:
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::::*'''ALT1a''' ... that a sculpture of the god [[Neptune (mythology)|Neptune]] on one of the parapets of the [[University of Washington]]'s '''[[Gerberding Hall]]''' ''(pictured)'' represents the academic disciplines of [[oceanography]] and [[fisheries science]]?
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::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] ALT1a good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:46, 27 February 2018 (UTC)
 
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Gerberding Hall

Gerberding Hall
Gerberding Hall
ALT1 ... that a sculpture of the god Neptune on one of the parapets of the University of Washington's Gerberding Hall (pictured) represents oceanography?

Created by Chetsford (talk). Self-nominated at 00:00, 18 February 2018 (UTC).

  • Drive-by comment: I think you can do more with this hook. It's not clear where Gerberding Hall is. And it's interesting that Neptune represents the oceanography and fisheries sciences. Yoninah (talk) 00:48, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
That's good feedback, Yoninah. I've put forward an ALT. Chetsford (talk) 05:40, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
  • Thank you. I'll do a full review: New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. All images are freely licensed. QPQ done. But I think the hook should read:
  • ALT1a ... that a sculpture of the god Neptune on one of the parapets of the University of Washington's Gerberding Hall (pictured) represents the academic disciplines of oceanography and fisheries science?
  • Symbol confirmed.svg ALT1a good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:46, 27 February 2018 (UTC)