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− | * ... that a sculpture, by [[Dudley Pratt]], of the god [[Neptune (mythology)|Neptune]] is situated along one of the parapets of '''[[Gerberding Hall]]'''? | + | * <s>... that a sculpture, by [[Dudley Pratt]], of the god [[Neptune (mythology)|Neptune]] is situated along one of the parapets of '''[[Gerberding Hall]]'''?</s> |
− | ::'''ALT1''' ... that a sculpture of the god [[Neptune (mythology)|Neptune]] on one of the parapets of the [[University of Washington]]'s '''[[Gerberding Hall]]''' (''pictured'') represents [[oceanography]]? | + | ::'''ALT1''' <s>... that a sculpture of the god [[Neptune (mythology)|Neptune]] on one of the parapets of the [[University of Washington]]'s '''[[Gerberding Hall]]''' (''pictured'') represents [[oceanography]]?</s> |
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Lake Manly]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Lake Manly]] | ||
<small>Created by [[User:Chetsford|Chetsford]] ([[User talk:Chetsford|talk]]). Self-nominated at 00:00, 18 February 2018 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Chetsford|Chetsford]] ([[User talk:Chetsford|talk]]). Self-nominated at 00:00, 18 February 2018 (UTC).</small> | ||
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:* Drive-by comment: I think you can do more with this hook. It's not clear where Gerberding Hall is. And it's interesting that Neptune represents the oceanography and fisheries sciences. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 00:48, 20 February 2018 (UTC) | :* Drive-by comment: I think you can do more with this hook. It's not clear where Gerberding Hall is. And it's interesting that Neptune represents the oceanography and fisheries sciences. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 00:48, 20 February 2018 (UTC) | ||
:::That's good feedback, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]]. I've put forward an ALT. [[User:Chetsford|Chetsford]] ([[User talk:Chetsford|talk]]) 05:40, 26 February 2018 (UTC) | :::That's good feedback, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]]. I've put forward an ALT. [[User:Chetsford|Chetsford]] ([[User talk:Chetsford|talk]]) 05:40, 26 February 2018 (UTC) | ||
+ | ::::*Thank you. I'll do a full review: New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. All images are freely licensed. QPQ done. But I think the hook should read: | ||
+ | ::::*'''ALT1a''' ... that a sculpture of the god [[Neptune (mythology)|Neptune]] on one of the parapets of the [[University of Washington]]'s '''[[Gerberding Hall]]''' ''(pictured)'' represents the academic disciplines of [[oceanography]] and [[fisheries science]]? | ||
+ | ::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] ALT1a good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:46, 27 February 2018 (UTC) | ||
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Gerberding Hall
... that a sculpture, by Dudley Pratt, of the god Neptune is situated along one of the parapets of Gerberding Hall?
- ALT1
... that a sculpture of the god Neptune on one of the parapets of the University of Washington's Gerberding Hall (pictured) represents oceanography?
- ALT1
Created by Chetsford (talk). Self-nominated at 00:00, 18 February 2018 (UTC).
- Drive-by comment: I think you can do more with this hook. It's not clear where Gerberding Hall is. And it's interesting that Neptune represents the oceanography and fisheries sciences. Yoninah (talk) 00:48, 20 February 2018 (UTC)
- That's good feedback, Yoninah. I've put forward an ALT. Chetsford (talk) 05:40, 26 February 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you. I'll do a full review: New enough, long enough, neutrally written, adequately referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. All images are freely licensed. QPQ done. But I think the hook should read:
- ALT1a ... that a sculpture of the god Neptune on one of the parapets of the University of Washington's Gerberding Hall (pictured) represents the academic disciplines of oceanography and fisheries science?
ALT1a good to go. Yoninah (talk) 20:46, 27 February 2018 (UTC)
- That's good feedback, Yoninah. I've put forward an ALT. Chetsford (talk) 05:40, 26 February 2018 (UTC)