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* ... that '''[[Gerd Nienstedt]]''' performed at the [[Bayreuth Festival]] 14 part in 15 summers, including the dragon in ''[[Siegfried (opera)|Siegfried]]''?
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* ... <s> that '''[[Gerd Nienstedt]]''' performed at the [[Bayreuth Festival]] 14 part in 15 summers, including the dragon in ''[[Siegfried (opera)|Siegfried]]''? </s>
 
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:* I found the wording "14 part in 15 summers" to be confusing.  May I offer the following alternative:
 
:* I found the wording "14 part in 15 summers" to be confusing.  May I offer the following alternative:
::* '''alt 1''' ... that '''[[Gerd Nienstedt]]''' performed 14 parts, including the dragon in ''[[Siegfried (opera)|Siegfried]]'', over 15 summers at the [[Bayreuth Festival]]? [[User:Cbl62|Cbl62]] ([[User talk:Cbl62|talk]]) 23:28, 10 August 2014 (UTC)
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::* '''alt 1''' ... <s> that '''[[Gerd Nienstedt]]''' performed 14 parts, including the dragon in ''[[Siegfried (opera)|Siegfried]]'', over 15 summers at the [[Bayreuth Festival]]? </s> [[User:Cbl62|Cbl62]] ([[User talk:Cbl62|talk]]) 23:28, 10 August 2014 (UTC)
  
 
:::*I think "parts" is not the best word here. Suggesting some further minor refinements:
 
:::*I think "parts" is not the best word here. Suggesting some further minor refinements:
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*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  Full review needed. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 05:09, 12 August 2014 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]]  Full review needed. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 05:09, 12 August 2014 (UTC)
 
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:* [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] The '''alt 2''' hook phrases it best. That hook is short enough, interesting enough, and is supported by an in-line citation to [https://www.bayreuther-festspiele.de/fsdb/personen/250/index.htm this] German-language source (good faith assumed). The article is long enough (> 9,000 characters), new enough (Aug. 10), neutral and uses in-line citations.  Spot-check finds no policy problems. QPQ satisfied. [[User:Cbl62|Cbl62]] ([[User talk:Cbl62|talk]]) 06:04, 12 August 2014 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 06:04, 12 August 2014

Gerd Nienstedt

  • Reviewed: Viola flettii
  • Comment: Best on 14 August, anniversary of death (missed the birthday)

Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self nominated at 23:06, 10 August 2014 (UTC).

  • I found the wording "14 part in 15 summers" to be confusing. May I offer the following alternative:
  • I think "parts" is not the best word here. Suggesting some further minor refinements:
I thought it added interest to specify that this was 15 years in a row, not a random 15 years. —BlueMoonset (talk) 05:09, 12 August 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol voting keep.svg The alt 2 hook phrases it best. That hook is short enough, interesting enough, and is supported by an in-line citation to this German-language source (good faith assumed). The article is long enough (> 9,000 characters), new enough (Aug. 10), neutral and uses in-line citations. Spot-check finds no policy problems. QPQ satisfied. Cbl62 (talk) 06:04, 12 August 2014 (UTC)