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* ... that '''[[Gern Nagler]]''' successfully petitioned [[NFL]] Commissioner [[Bert Bell]] to create the league's first player pension during his only season with the [[Pittsburgh Steelers]]? <small>Source: "Nagler was involved with the early efforts to organize a players' union, and was a key figure in the creation of the first players' pension. Nagler and Cleveland Browns end Billy Howton presented NFL Commissioner Bert Bell with a draft anti-trust lawsuit, threatening to file if the NFL did not immediately establish a pension for its players. The gambit worked, and the pension was formally established three years later." (source: The Oregonian article)</small> | * ... that '''[[Gern Nagler]]''' successfully petitioned [[NFL]] Commissioner [[Bert Bell]] to create the league's first player pension during his only season with the [[Pittsburgh Steelers]]? <small>Source: "Nagler was involved with the early efforts to organize a players' union, and was a key figure in the creation of the first players' pension. Nagler and Cleveland Browns end Billy Howton presented NFL Commissioner Bert Bell with a draft anti-trust lawsuit, threatening to file if the NFL did not immediately establish a pension for its players. The gambit worked, and the pension was formally established three years later." (source: The Oregonian article)</small> | ||
** '''ALT1''':... that [[Chicago Cardinals (NFL, 1920–59)|Chicago Cardinals]] end '''[[Gern Nagler]]''' helped coach the [[Fort Sill]] base football team to a perfect record and a [[Poinsettia Bowl]] victory in 1954? <small>Source: "Nagler missed the 1954 NFL season due to military service. While posted at Fort Sill, Oklahoma, Nagler helped coach the base football team to the All-Service Championship, winning the 1954 Poinsettia Bowl (source: Lawton Constitution article)</small> | ** '''ALT1''':... that [[Chicago Cardinals (NFL, 1920–59)|Chicago Cardinals]] end '''[[Gern Nagler]]''' helped coach the [[Fort Sill]] base football team to a perfect record and a [[Poinsettia Bowl]] victory in 1954? <small>Source: "Nagler missed the 1954 NFL season due to military service. While posted at Fort Sill, Oklahoma, Nagler helped coach the base football team to the All-Service Championship, winning the 1954 Poinsettia Bowl (source: Lawton Constitution article)</small> | ||
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Lady Angela Forbes|Lady Angela Forbes]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Lady Angela Forbes|Lady Angela Forbes]] | ||
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Caknuck|Caknuck]] ([[User talk:Caknuck|talk]]). Self-nominated at 09:37, 14 October 2018 (UTC).</small> | <small>5x expanded by [[User:Caknuck|Caknuck]] ([[User talk:Caknuck|talk]]). Self-nominated at 09:37, 14 October 2018 (UTC).</small> | ||
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The expansion on this article was well over 5x and was new enough at the time of nomination. The article is long enough at almost 2,200 characters, and the hooks are interesting and adequately formatted. I can't access that Oregonian page, but will AGF that it adequately supports part of the first hook fact. Unfortunately, the bit about him spending one season with Pittsburgh doesn't have an inline cite, which is required by the DYK rules. ALT1 is verified by the Lawton Constitution article. I do have a couple of other concerns here. First, the fifth paragraph doesn't have any references at all, which goes against DYK guidelines. DYK doesn't require GA-level sourcing, but at least one reference per paragraph is the minimum standards. This information should be available on his Pro Football Reference page, in addition to the length of his Pittsburgh career. Second, ref 3 (one of the only links I was able to spot-check) doesn't verify when Nagler was drafted; again, Pro Football Reference should have this listed on his profile there. The other source I spot-checked, ref 2, had no issues. Fix these couple of issues and this article should be ready. [[User:Giants2008|<span style="color: blue">Giants2008</span>]] ([[User talk:Giants2008|<span style="color: darkblue;">Talk</span>]]) 01:21, 24 October 2018 (UTC) | :*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The expansion on this article was well over 5x and was new enough at the time of nomination. The article is long enough at almost 2,200 characters, and the hooks are interesting and adequately formatted. I can't access that Oregonian page, but will AGF that it adequately supports part of the first hook fact. Unfortunately, the bit about him spending one season with Pittsburgh doesn't have an inline cite, which is required by the DYK rules. ALT1 is verified by the Lawton Constitution article. I do have a couple of other concerns here. First, the fifth paragraph doesn't have any references at all, which goes against DYK guidelines. DYK doesn't require GA-level sourcing, but at least one reference per paragraph is the minimum standards. This information should be available on his Pro Football Reference page, in addition to the length of his Pittsburgh career. Second, ref 3 (one of the only links I was able to spot-check) doesn't verify when Nagler was drafted; again, Pro Football Reference should have this listed on his profile there. The other source I spot-checked, ref 2, had no issues. Fix these couple of issues and this article should be ready. [[User:Giants2008|<span style="color: blue">Giants2008</span>]] ([[User talk:Giants2008|<span style="color: darkblue;">Talk</span>]]) 01:21, 24 October 2018 (UTC) | ||
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:::*The text of the Oregonian article is available [http://nflretirees.blogspot.com/2006/08/old-timers-cast-aside-by-nfl.html on this blog], and I was able to confirm the text of the article via newsbank.com. (Newsbank is reliable, but requires an login account to use. I get access via my public library.) | :::*The text of the Oregonian article is available [http://nflretirees.blogspot.com/2006/08/old-timers-cast-aside-by-nfl.html on this blog], and I was able to confirm the text of the article via newsbank.com. (Newsbank is reliable, but requires an login account to use. I get access via my public library.) | ||
:::Please let me know if you have any other concerns for me to address. Thanks, <b>[[User:Caknuck|<span style="color: #FF6600;">caknuck</span>]] <sub>[[User talk:Caknuck|<span style="color: black;">°</span>]]</sub> <span style="color: #FF6600;">needs to be running more often</span></b> 12:25, 24 October 2018 (UTC) | :::Please let me know if you have any other concerns for me to address. Thanks, <b>[[User:Caknuck|<span style="color: #FF6600;">caknuck</span>]] <sub>[[User talk:Caknuck|<span style="color: black;">°</span>]]</sub> <span style="color: #FF6600;">needs to be running more often</span></b> 12:25, 24 October 2018 (UTC) | ||
− | ::::[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] The changes look good. This article is ready to go now. [[User:Giants2008|<span style="color: blue">Giants2008</span>]] ([[User talk:Giants2008|<span style="color: darkblue;">Talk</span>]]) 17:41, 24 October 2018 (UTC) | + | ::::[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] The changes look good. This article is ready to go now. [[User:Giants2008|<span style="color: blue">Giants2008</span>]] ([[User talk:Giants2008|<span style="color: darkblue;">Talk</span>]]) 17:41, 24 October 2018 (UTC) |
+ | [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] {{ping|Caknuck}} {{ping|Giants2008}} {{ping|Edwardx}} sorry for the inconvenience, this has been sent back to the nom page following [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3AThe_Rambling_Man%2FERRORS&diff=prev&oldid=869546533 issues raised] by {{u|The Rambling Man}}, including an orange tag on the article indicating that it needs additional citations. Please have a look at these issues, and then the page can be resubmitted. Thanks — [[User:Amakuru|Amakuru]] ([[User talk:Amakuru|talk]]) 22:59, 19 November 2018 (UTC) | ||
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Gern Nagler
- ... that Gern Nagler successfully petitioned NFL Commissioner Bert Bell to create the league's first player pension during his only season with the Pittsburgh Steelers? Source: "Nagler was involved with the early efforts to organize a players' union, and was a key figure in the creation of the first players' pension. Nagler and Cleveland Browns end Billy Howton presented NFL Commissioner Bert Bell with a draft anti-trust lawsuit, threatening to file if the NFL did not immediately establish a pension for its players. The gambit worked, and the pension was formally established three years later." (source: The Oregonian article)
- ALT1:... that Chicago Cardinals end Gern Nagler helped coach the Fort Sill base football team to a perfect record and a Poinsettia Bowl victory in 1954? Source: "Nagler missed the 1954 NFL season due to military service. While posted at Fort Sill, Oklahoma, Nagler helped coach the base football team to the All-Service Championship, winning the 1954 Poinsettia Bowl (source: Lawton Constitution article)
- Reviewed: Lady Angela Forbes
5x expanded by Caknuck (talk). Self-nominated at 09:37, 14 October 2018 (UTC).
The expansion on this article was well over 5x and was new enough at the time of nomination. The article is long enough at almost 2,200 characters, and the hooks are interesting and adequately formatted. I can't access that Oregonian page, but will AGF that it adequately supports part of the first hook fact. Unfortunately, the bit about him spending one season with Pittsburgh doesn't have an inline cite, which is required by the DYK rules. ALT1 is verified by the Lawton Constitution article. I do have a couple of other concerns here. First, the fifth paragraph doesn't have any references at all, which goes against DYK guidelines. DYK doesn't require GA-level sourcing, but at least one reference per paragraph is the minimum standards. This information should be available on his Pro Football Reference page, in addition to the length of his Pittsburgh career. Second, ref 3 (one of the only links I was able to spot-check) doesn't verify when Nagler was drafted; again, Pro Football Reference should have this listed on his profile there. The other source I spot-checked, ref 2, had no issues. Fix these couple of issues and this article should be ready. Giants2008 (Talk) 01:21, 24 October 2018 (UTC)
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- Citations have been provided for the draft, his PFR profile (which indicates his one year in Pittsburgh) and his Pro Bowl selection.
- The text of the Oregonian article is available on this blog, and I was able to confirm the text of the article via newsbank.com. (Newsbank is reliable, but requires an login account to use. I get access via my public library.)
- Please let me know if you have any other concerns for me to address. Thanks, caknuck ° needs to be running more often 12:25, 24 October 2018 (UTC)
The changes look good. This article is ready to go now. Giants2008 (Talk) 17:41, 24 October 2018 (UTC)
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Template:Ping Template:Ping Template:Ping sorry for the inconvenience, this has been sent back to the nom page following issues raised by Template:U, including an orange tag on the article indicating that it needs additional citations. Please have a look at these issues, and then the page can be resubmitted. Thanks — Amakuru (talk) 22:59, 19 November 2018 (UTC)