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:*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] The last sentence has no inline citation. Close paraphrasing - "Soluk received '''a master's degree in counseling and guidance''' from the University of Michigan." in article compared to "where she gained '''a master's degree in counseling and guidance'''". [[User:SL93|SL93]] ([[User talk:SL93|talk]]) 01:26, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
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:*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] The last sentence has no inline citation. <s>Close paraphrasing - "Soluk received '''a master's degree in counseling and guidance''' from the University of Michigan." in article compared to "where she gained '''a master's degree in counseling and guidance'''"</s>. [[User:SL93|SL93]] ([[User talk:SL93|talk]]) 01:26, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
 
:**A QPQ is still needed as well. [[User:SL93|SL93]] ([[User talk:SL93|talk]]) 01:29, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
 
:**A QPQ is still needed as well. [[User:SL93|SL93]] ([[User talk:SL93|talk]]) 01:29, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
 
::: Will take care of the QPQ and the inline citation, but not sure how that could be considered unduly close paraphrasing.  The degree is called a "master's degree in counseling and guidance."  It would be inappropriate to call it anything else. [[User:Cbl62|Cbl62]] ([[User talk:Cbl62|talk]]) 01:33, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
 
::: Will take care of the QPQ and the inline citation, but not sure how that could be considered unduly close paraphrasing.  The degree is called a "master's degree in counseling and guidance."  It would be inappropriate to call it anything else. [[User:Cbl62|Cbl62]] ([[User talk:Cbl62|talk]]) 01:33, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
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::::You have a point. I have crossed that out. [[User:SL93|SL93]] ([[User talk:SL93|talk]]) 01:34, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 01:34, 12 July 2013

Gloria Soluk

  • Reviewed: pending

Created by Cbl62 (talk). Self nominated at 00:49, 12 July 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg The last sentence has no inline citation. Close paraphrasing - "Soluk received a master's degree in counseling and guidance from the University of Michigan." in article compared to "where she gained a master's degree in counseling and guidance". SL93 (talk) 01:26, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
    • A QPQ is still needed as well. SL93 (talk) 01:29, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
Will take care of the QPQ and the inline citation, but not sure how that could be considered unduly close paraphrasing. The degree is called a "master's degree in counseling and guidance." It would be inappropriate to call it anything else. Cbl62 (talk) 01:33, 12 July 2013 (UTC)
You have a point. I have crossed that out. SL93 (talk) 01:34, 12 July 2013 (UTC)