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====Golden-winged Sunbird==== | ====Golden-winged Sunbird==== | ||
{{DYK nompage links|nompage=Golden-winged Sunbird|Golden-winged Sunbird}} | {{DYK nompage links|nompage=Golden-winged Sunbird|Golden-winged Sunbird}} | ||
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[[File:Golden-winged Sunbird (Drepanorhynchus reichenowi) -Kenya.jpg|100x100px|Golden-winged Sunbird feeding on Leonotis nepetifolia, Kenya]] | [[File:Golden-winged Sunbird (Drepanorhynchus reichenowi) -Kenya.jpg|100x100px|Golden-winged Sunbird feeding on Leonotis nepetifolia, Kenya]] | ||
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{{*mp}}... that the range of the '''[[Golden-winged Sunbird]]''' coincides with its major food item, the mint ''[[Leonotis nepetifolia]]'' ''(both pictured)''? | {{*mp}}... that the range of the '''[[Golden-winged Sunbird]]''' coincides with its major food item, the mint ''[[Leonotis nepetifolia]]'' ''(both pictured)''? | ||
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:*''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Capture of Malolos]] | :*''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Capture of Malolos]] | ||
<small>Created/expanded by [[User:Casliber|Casliber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]]), [[User:Zhangt2413|Zhangt2413]] ([[User talk:Zhangt2413|talk]]), [[User:Snowmanradio|Snowmanradio]] ([[User talk:Snowmanradio|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Casliber|Casliber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]]) at 04:18, 27 September 2012 (UTC)</small> | <small>Created/expanded by [[User:Casliber|Casliber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]]), [[User:Zhangt2413|Zhangt2413]] ([[User talk:Zhangt2413|talk]]), [[User:Snowmanradio|Snowmanradio]] ([[User talk:Snowmanradio|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Casliber|Casliber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]]) at 04:18, 27 September 2012 (UTC)</small> | ||
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Size (3977 characters) and date (5x expansion since 26 September) check out. Third paragraph of the Feeding section needs to be cited.--'''[[User:So God created Manchester|SGCM]]''' [[User talk:So God created Manchester|<font color="orange">(''talk'')</font>]] 11:26, 27 September 2012 (UTC) | :*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Size (3977 characters) and date (5x expansion since 26 September) check out. Third paragraph of the Feeding section needs to be cited.--'''[[User:So God created Manchester|SGCM]]''' [[User talk:So God created Manchester|<font color="orange">(''talk'')</font>]] 11:26, 27 September 2012 (UTC) | ||
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:*Works for me. Accuracy is paramount. [[User:Casliber|Casliber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Casliber|contribs]]) 22:28, 6 October 2012 (UTC) | :*Works for me. Accuracy is paramount. [[User:Casliber|Casliber]] ([[User talk:Casliber|talk]] '''·''' [[Special:Contributions/Casliber|contribs]]) 22:28, 6 October 2012 (UTC) | ||
::*[[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|16px]] Alt hook and citations check out. Length and size have already been reviewed. Good to go.--'''[[User:So God created Manchester|SGCM]]''' [[User talk:So God created Manchester|<font color="orange">(''talk'')</font>]] 23:05, 6 October 2012 (UTC) | ::*[[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|16px]] Alt hook and citations check out. Length and size have already been reviewed. Good to go.--'''[[User:So God created Manchester|SGCM]]''' [[User talk:So God created Manchester|<font color="orange">(''talk'')</font>]] 23:05, 6 October 2012 (UTC) | ||
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Revision as of 23:39, 6 October 2012
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 23:39, 6 October 2012 (UTC)
Golden-winged Sunbird
- ... that the range of the Golden-winged Sunbird coincides with its major food item, the mint Leonotis nepetifolia (both pictured)?
Created/expanded by Casliber (talk), Zhangt2413 (talk), Snowmanradio (talk). Nominated by Casliber (talk) at 04:18, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
Problems. The feeding section only refers to East Africa and the birds range is also Central Africa (see the articles introduction which says it lives in the Congo). This inconsistency could easily lead to doubts about the hook of the DYK. I think that the references all need checking and the article needs to be more internally consistent. I think that the range needs referencing. Snowman (talk) 12:59, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
- Update - cited the[citation needed] tag and realigned the information - essentially alot of the study info comes from studies in Kenya, so tweaked wording to show this. Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:31, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
- I am glad that you have found useful sources. It sounds that you can now amend the range mentioned in the feeding section and make it consistent with the rest of the article, which would make the hook usable, if the hook is correct. In anticipation of fixes, I have struck this out as a problem. Incidentally, I think that the image is ideally suited to the hook. Snowman (talk) 14:35, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
- I rejigged the wording so that it showed that although the discussion was in Kenya, it did not imply that the birds exclusively lived there. Do you think that is more clear or still misleading from the way I have rejigged it? Casliber (talk · contribs) 21:16, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
- Without seeing the sources, I think that I would like a little more clarity. I am finding the location given as "East Africa" to be rather vague, and I am not sure if eastern Democratic Republic of the Congo is in central Africa or East Africa. Perhaps, it would be clearer if you said something like; "Studies in Kenya showed that ..." Snowman (talk) 22:08, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
- I rejigged the wording so that it showed that although the discussion was in Kenya, it did not imply that the birds exclusively lived there. Do you think that is more clear or still misleading from the way I have rejigged it? Casliber (talk · contribs) 21:16, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
- I am glad that you have found useful sources. It sounds that you can now amend the range mentioned in the feeding section and make it consistent with the rest of the article, which would make the hook usable, if the hook is correct. In anticipation of fixes, I have struck this out as a problem. Incidentally, I think that the image is ideally suited to the hook. Snowman (talk) 14:35, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
- Update - cited the[citation needed] tag and realigned the information - essentially alot of the study info comes from studies in Kenya, so tweaked wording to show this. Casliber (talk · contribs) 14:31, 27 September 2012 (UTC)
Need a reviewer to see whether the nomination has the necessary citations, and anything else not yet checked. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:33, 6 October 2012 (UTC)
- ... that the range of the Golden-winged Sunbird coincides with its major food item, the nectar of the plant Leonotis nepetifolia (both pictured) (ALT1)?