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:::::* {{u|Yoninah}} Thanks. I suggest the following '''ALt2''' hook ... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' served during [[World War I]] as Chief Operator of telephones of the [[American Expeditionary Forces]] (AEF) in the [[U.S. Army Signal Corps]]?'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 02:13, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
 
:::::* {{u|Yoninah}} Thanks. I suggest the following '''ALt2''' hook ... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' served during [[World War I]] as Chief Operator of telephones of the [[American Expeditionary Forces]] (AEF) in the [[U.S. Army Signal Corps]]?'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 02:13, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
 
::::::*{{ping|Nvvchar}} How about:
 
::::::*{{ping|Nvvchar}} How about:
::::::*'''ALT3''': ... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' and her team of telephone operators reported for work in France wearing helmets and gas masks? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:05, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
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::::::*'''ALT3''': ... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' and her team of telephone operators reported for work wearing helmets and gas masks? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:05, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 
:::::::*Actually, I would skip the image for ALT3 to make it more hooky. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:09, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 
:::::::*Actually, I would skip the image for ALT3 to make it more hooky. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:09, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 22:41, 30 April 2016

Grace Banker

Grace Banker
Grace Banker

Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 02:03, 16 April 2016 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg This was a good read. Large enough, fully sourced, qpq done. Didn't detect any copyvio. The hook's a bit long, perhaps remove "with the First Army headquarters". --Al Ameer (talk) 22:22, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Great, thanks for the adjustment. --Al Ameer (talk) 18:16, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg It would be far more hooky if you said she worked as a telephone operator. Yoninah (talk) 23:27, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping How about:
  • ALT3: ... that Grace Banker (pictured) and her team of telephone operators reported for work wearing helmets and gas masks? Yoninah (talk) 21:05, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Actually, I would skip the image for ALT3 to make it more hooky. Yoninah (talk) 22:09, 30 April 2016 (UTC)