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::::::*'''ALT3''': ... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' and her team of telephone operators reported for work wearing helmets and gas masks? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:05, 30 April 2016 (UTC) | ::::::*'''ALT3''': ... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' and her team of telephone operators reported for work wearing helmets and gas masks? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:05, 30 April 2016 (UTC) | ||
:::::::*Actually, I would skip the image for ALT3 to make it more hooky. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:09, 30 April 2016 (UTC) | :::::::*Actually, I would skip the image for ALT3 to make it more hooky. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:09, 30 April 2016 (UTC) | ||
| + | ::::::::*I agree with ALT3 hook suggestion without img.'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 00:51, 1 May 2016 (UTC) | ||
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Grace Banker
- ... that Grace Banker (pictured) was awarded the Distinguished Service Medal for her services with the First Army headquarters during the St. Mihiel and Meuse-Argonne Offensives during World War I?
Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 02:03, 16 April 2016 (UTC).
This was a good read. Large enough, fully sourced, qpq done. Didn't detect any copyvio. The hook's a bit long, perhaps remove "with the First Army headquarters". --Al Ameer (talk) 22:22, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
- Template:UThanks for the review. As suggested here is shortened ALT1 hook... that Grace Banker (pictured) was awarded the Distinguished Service Medal for her services during the St. Mihiel and Meuse-Argonne Offensives during World War I?Nvvchar. 01:38, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
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It would be far more hooky if you said she worked as a telephone operator. Yoninah (talk) 23:27, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
- Template:U Thanks. I suggest the following ALt2 hook ... that Grace Banker (pictured) served during World War I as Chief Operator of telephones of the American Expeditionary Forces (AEF) in the U.S. Army Signal Corps?Nvvchar. 02:13, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
- Template:Ping How about:
- ALT3: ... that Grace Banker (pictured) and her team of telephone operators reported for work wearing helmets and gas masks? Yoninah (talk) 21:05, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
