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* ... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' was awarded the [[Distinguished Service Medal (U.S. Army)|Distinguished Service Medal]] for her services with the First Army headquarters during the [[Battle of Saint-Mihiel |St. Mihiel]] and [[Meuse-Argonne Offensive]]s during [[World War I]]?
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*<s> ... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' was awarded the [[Distinguished Service Medal (U.S. Army)|Distinguished Service Medal]] for her services with the First Army headquarters during the [[Battle of Saint-Mihiel |St. Mihiel]] and [[Meuse-Argonne Offensive]]s during [[World War I]]?</s>
  
 
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] This was a good read. Large enough, fully sourced, qpq done. Didn't detect any copyvio. The hook's a bit long, perhaps remove "with the First Army headquarters". --[[User:Al Ameer son|Al Ameer]] ([[User talk:Al Ameer son|talk]]) 22:22, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] This was a good read. Large enough, fully sourced, qpq done. Didn't detect any copyvio. The hook's a bit long, perhaps remove "with the First Army headquarters". --[[User:Al Ameer son|Al Ameer]] ([[User talk:Al Ameer son|talk]]) 22:22, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
::* {{u|Al Ameer son}}Thanks for the review. As suggested here is shortened  '''ALT1''' hook... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' was awarded the [[Distinguished Service Medal (U.S. Army)|Distinguished Service Medal]] for her services during the [[Battle of Saint-Mihiel |St. Mihiel]] and [[Meuse-Argonne Offensive]]s during [[World War I]]?'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 01:38, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
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::* {{u|Al Ameer son}}Thanks for the review. As suggested here is shortened  '''ALT1''' hook <s>... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' was awarded the [[Distinguished Service Medal (U.S. Army)|Distinguished Service Medal]] for her services during the [[Battle of Saint-Mihiel |St. Mihiel]] and [[Meuse-Argonne Offensive]]s during [[World War I]]?'''</s> [[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 01:38, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
 
:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Great, thanks for the adjustment. --[[User:Al Ameer son|Al Ameer]] ([[User talk:Al Ameer son|talk]]) 18:16, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
 
:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Great, thanks for the adjustment. --[[User:Al Ameer son|Al Ameer]] ([[User talk:Al Ameer son|talk]]) 18:16, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
 
::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] It would be far more hooky if you said she worked as a telephone operator. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:27, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
 
::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] It would be far more hooky if you said she worked as a telephone operator. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:27, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
:::::* {{u|Yoninah}} Thanks. I suggest the following '''ALt2''' hook ... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' served during [[World War I]] as Chief Operator of telephones of the [[American Expeditionary Forces]] (AEF) in the [[U.S. Army Signal Corps]]?'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 02:13, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
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:::::* {{u|Yoninah}} Thanks. I suggest the following '''ALt2''' hook <s>... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' ''(pictured)'' served during [[World War I]] as Chief Operator of telephones of the [[American Expeditionary Forces]] (AEF) in the [[U.S. Army Signal Corps]]?'''</s>[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 02:13, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
 
::::::*{{ping|Nvvchar}} How about:
 
::::::*{{ping|Nvvchar}} How about:
 
::::::*'''ALT3''': ... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' and her team of telephone operators reported for work wearing helmets and gas masks? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:05, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
 
::::::*'''ALT3''': ... that '''[[Grace Banker]]''' and her team of telephone operators reported for work wearing helmets and gas masks? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:05, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

Revision as of 09:40, 1 May 2016

Grace Banker

Grace Banker
Grace Banker

Created by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 02:03, 16 April 2016 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg This was a good read. Large enough, fully sourced, qpq done. Didn't detect any copyvio. The hook's a bit long, perhaps remove "with the First Army headquarters". --Al Ameer (talk) 22:22, 20 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Great, thanks for the adjustment. --Al Ameer (talk) 18:16, 21 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg It would be far more hooky if you said she worked as a telephone operator. Yoninah (talk) 23:27, 27 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Actually, I would skip the image for ALT3 to make it more hooky. Yoninah (talk) 22:09, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
  • I agree with ALT3 hook suggestion without img.Nvvchar. 00:51, 1 May 2016 (UTC)

Template:OutdentSymbol redirect vote 4.svg New reviewer needed for ALT3. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 09:39, 1 May 2016 (UTC)