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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Barely long enough, but passes, also date is fine. I'd suggest and alt hook using the word "wine bottle", I don't understand the pipe through Balthazar, which is not explained in text, neither. --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]|[[User talk:Piotrus|<font style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</font>]]</sub> 16:20, 17 July 2012 (UTC) | :*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Barely long enough, but passes, also date is fine. I'd suggest and alt hook using the word "wine bottle", I don't understand the pipe through Balthazar, which is not explained in text, neither. --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]|[[User talk:Piotrus|<font style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</font>]]</sub> 16:20, 17 July 2012 (UTC) | ||
− | ::* How about '''ALT1:'''"... that two 12-liter bottles ([[wine bottle|Balthazars]]) of '''[[Grace Family Vineyards]]''' cabernet and their second label, Blank, drew a $160,000 [[auction]] bid at the [[Naples Winter Wine Festival]]??" There's characters to spare, so explaining in the text is fine. And, a Balthazar is a very big bottle of wine (it's the equivalent of | + | ::* How about '''ALT1:'''"... that two 12-liter bottles ([[wine bottle|Balthazars]]) of '''[[Grace Family Vineyards]]''' cabernet and their second label, Blank, drew a $160,000 [[auction]] bid at the [[Naples Winter Wine Festival]]??" There's characters to spare, so explaining in the text is fine. And, a Balthazar is a very big bottle of wine (it's the equivalent of 16 standard bottles, or a case and a third); that's explained in the linked [[wine bottle]] article. [[User:Tthaas|Tthaas]] ([[User talk:Tthaas|talk]]) 22:17, 17 July 2012 (UTC) |
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Grace Family Vineyards
- ... that a 12-liter Balthazar of Grace Family Vineyards cabernet and their second label, Blank, drew a $160,000 auction bid at the Naples Winter Wine Festival??
- Reviewed: Lindsay Sutton
Created/expanded by Tthaas (talk). Self nom at 12:00, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
Barely long enough, but passes, also date is fine. I'd suggest and alt hook using the word "wine bottle", I don't understand the pipe through Balthazar, which is not explained in text, neither. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 16:20, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
- How about ALT1:"... that two 12-liter bottles (Balthazars) of Grace Family Vineyards cabernet and their second label, Blank, drew a $160,000 auction bid at the Naples Winter Wine Festival??" There's characters to spare, so explaining in the text is fine. And, a Balthazar is a very big bottle of wine (it's the equivalent of 16 standard bottles, or a case and a third); that's explained in the linked wine bottle article. Tthaas (talk) 22:17, 17 July 2012 (UTC)