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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Barely long enough, but passes, also date is fine. I'd suggest and alt hook using the word "wine bottle", I don't understand the pipe through Balthazar, which is not explained in text, neither. --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]|[[User talk:Piotrus|<font style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</font>]]</sub> 16:20, 17 July 2012 (UTC) | :*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Barely long enough, but passes, also date is fine. I'd suggest and alt hook using the word "wine bottle", I don't understand the pipe through Balthazar, which is not explained in text, neither. --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]|[[User talk:Piotrus|<font style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</font>]]</sub> 16:20, 17 July 2012 (UTC) | ||
::* How about '''ALT1:'''"... that two 12-liter bottles ([[wine bottle|Balthazars]]) of '''[[Grace Family Vineyards]]''' cabernet and their second label, Blank, drew a $160,000 [[auction]] bid at the [[Naples Winter Wine Festival]]??" There's characters to spare, so explaining in the text is fine. And, a Balthazar is a very big bottle of wine (it's the equivalent of 16 standard bottles, or a case and a third); that's explained in the linked [[wine bottle]] article. [[User:Tthaas|Tthaas]] ([[User talk:Tthaas|talk]]) 22:17, 17 July 2012 (UTC) | ::* How about '''ALT1:'''"... that two 12-liter bottles ([[wine bottle|Balthazars]]) of '''[[Grace Family Vineyards]]''' cabernet and their second label, Blank, drew a $160,000 [[auction]] bid at the [[Naples Winter Wine Festival]]??" There's characters to spare, so explaining in the text is fine. And, a Balthazar is a very big bottle of wine (it's the equivalent of 16 standard bottles, or a case and a third); that's explained in the linked [[wine bottle]] article. [[User:Tthaas|Tthaas]] ([[User talk:Tthaas|talk]]) 22:17, 17 July 2012 (UTC) | ||
+ | :*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The entire "Charity" section has been tagged for Relevance since July 22. The article currently has 1,645 characters of readable prose. If the "Charity" section is eliminated, the rest of the article needs to be expanded to meet the basic size qualification.[[User:Maile66|Maile66]] ([[User talk:Maile66|talk]]) 16:07, 29 July 2012 (UTC) | ||
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Grace Family Vineyards
- ... that a 12-liter Balthazar of Grace Family Vineyards cabernet and their second label, Blank, drew a $160,000 auction bid at the Naples Winter Wine Festival??
- Reviewed: Lindsay Sutton
Created/expanded by Tthaas (talk). Self nom at 12:00, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
Barely long enough, but passes, also date is fine. I'd suggest and alt hook using the word "wine bottle", I don't understand the pipe through Balthazar, which is not explained in text, neither. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 16:20, 17 July 2012 (UTC)
- How about ALT1:"... that two 12-liter bottles (Balthazars) of Grace Family Vineyards cabernet and their second label, Blank, drew a $160,000 auction bid at the Naples Winter Wine Festival??" There's characters to spare, so explaining in the text is fine. And, a Balthazar is a very big bottle of wine (it's the equivalent of 16 standard bottles, or a case and a third); that's explained in the linked wine bottle article. Tthaas (talk) 22:17, 17 July 2012 (UTC)