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* ... that '''[[Graham Charlesworth]]''' made only one [[Century (cricket)|century]] in [[List A cricket]]?
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*<s> ... that '''[[Graham Charlesworth]]''' made only one [[Century (cricket)|century]] in [[List A cricket]]?</s>
  
:* '''ALT1''':... that '''[[Graham Charlesworth]]''' is the coach of the [[Oxford University cricket team]]?
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:* '''ALT1''':<s>... that '''[[Graham Charlesworth]]''' is the coach of the [[Oxford University cricket team]]?</s>
 
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<small>Created by [[User:Joseph2302|Joseph2302]] ([[User talk:Joseph2302|talk]]). Self-nominated at 18:21, 17 March 2016 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Joseph2302|Joseph2302]] ([[User talk:Joseph2302|talk]]). Self-nominated at 18:21, 17 March 2016 (UTC).</small>
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::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Hi, I came by to promote this. Frankly, I find the hooks dull. Before you tell me that I know nothing about cricket, I'm willing to promote the first hook, but I don't see the hook fact in the article. The article says that he scored one century in List A cricket, but doesn't say that it was the only one he ever made. Additionally, the URLs all look alike; could you add in the title and date of each ref? Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 14:57, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
 
::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Hi, I came by to promote this. Frankly, I find the hooks dull. Before you tell me that I know nothing about cricket, I'm willing to promote the first hook, but I don't see the hook fact in the article. The article says that he scored one century in List A cricket, but doesn't say that it was the only one he ever made. Additionally, the URLs all look alike; could you add in the title and date of each ref? Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 14:57, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
 
::*{{ping|Yoninah}} I've fixed the refs (the ref filling tool I use doesn't do that website properly). As for the hook, I'm open to ideas/feedback, although as he's only notable as a cricketer, the hook is going to have to be about cricket. Would you consider the below more interesting?
 
::*{{ping|Yoninah}} I've fixed the refs (the ref filling tool I use doesn't do that website properly). As for the hook, I'm open to ideas/feedback, although as he's only notable as a cricketer, the hook is going to have to be about cricket. Would you consider the below more interesting?
::*'''ALT2''':... that '''[[Graham Charlesworth]]''' has played [[first-class cricket]] in [[England]] and [[South Africa]]....?
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::*'''ALT2''':... that '''[[Graham Charlesworth]]''' has played [[first-class cricket]] in [[England]] and [[South Africa]]?
 
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:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Yes, I think that's good, thanks. ALT2 hook ref verified and cited inline. Rest of review per Skr15081997. ALT2 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 16:13, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 16:13, 10 April 2016

Graham Charlesworth

Created by Joseph2302 (talk). Self-nominated at 18:21, 17 March 2016 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Article meets the length and age criteria. Both the hook facts are cited to reliable sources. QPQ has been done. No plagiarism detected. No POV issues. Good to Go. --Skr15081997 (talk) 10:24, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Hi, I came by to promote this. Frankly, I find the hooks dull. Before you tell me that I know nothing about cricket, I'm willing to promote the first hook, but I don't see the hook fact in the article. The article says that he scored one century in List A cricket, but doesn't say that it was the only one he ever made. Additionally, the URLs all look alike; could you add in the title and date of each ref? Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 14:57, 10 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping I've fixed the refs (the ref filling tool I use doesn't do that website properly). As for the hook, I'm open to ideas/feedback, although as he's only notable as a cricketer, the hook is going to have to be about cricket. Would you consider the below more interesting?
  • ALT2:... that Graham Charlesworth has played first-class cricket in England and South Africa?
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Yes, I think that's good, thanks. ALT2 hook ref verified and cited inline. Rest of review per Skr15081997. ALT2 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 16:13, 10 April 2016 (UTC)