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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 05:25, 15 October 2016 (UTC)<br />
 
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====Grand Theatre, Perth====
 
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* ... that the '''[[Grand Theatre, Perth|Grand Theatre]]''' was the first in Australia to be lit by [[neon lighting|neon lights]]?  <small>Source: "The Grand is the first theatre in Australia entirely illuminated by neon lights" [http://trove.nla.gov.au/newspaper/article/46285617 West Australian newspaper]</small>
 
* ... that the '''[[Grand Theatre, Perth|Grand Theatre]]''' was the first in Australia to be lit by [[neon lighting|neon lights]]?  <small>Source: "The Grand is the first theatre in Australia entirely illuminated by neon lights" [http://trove.nla.gov.au/newspaper/article/46285617 West Australian newspaper]</small>
  
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:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Clio (Hendrik Goltzius)|Clio (Hendrik Goltzius)]]
 
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<small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:Dan arndt|Dan arndt]] ([[User talk:Dan arndt|talk]]). Self-nominated at 09:16, 27 September 2016 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:Dan arndt|Dan arndt]] ([[User talk:Dan arndt|talk]]). Self-nominated at 09:16, 27 September 2016 (UTC).</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New, long enough, neutral. Hook is interesting and reliably sourced. Good to go. '''[[User:Citobun|Citobun]]''' ([[User_talk:Citobun|talk]]) 14:56, 27 September 2016 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New, long enough, neutral. Hook is interesting and reliably sourced. Good to go. '''[[User:Citobun|Citobun]]''' ([[User_talk:Citobun|talk]]) 14:56, 27 September 2016 (UTC)
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***{{U|Pppery}} Whilst I didn't specifically state it in the QPQ review the article in question had several citations for each paragraph. [[User:Dan arndt|Dan arndt]] ([[User talk:Dan arndt|talk]]) 15:07, 9 October 2016 (UTC)  
 
***{{U|Pppery}} Whilst I didn't specifically state it in the QPQ review the article in question had several citations for each paragraph. [[User:Dan arndt|Dan arndt]] ([[User talk:Dan arndt|talk]]) 15:07, 9 October 2016 (UTC)  
 
* With regard to PARAPHRASE, the following sentence in particular is very close to the source" ''Over the years, very few changes were made to the façade of the Grand Theatre, with the brickwork being painted over, a new neon sign added down the length of the façade, and the original ornate metal verandah replaced with a more modern style.'' There are also a number of phrases taken directly from other sources which I think could be reworked, such as "in aid of wounded soldiers", "bailiffs were called in", "taken over by ... bought out the other members". [[User:Gatoclass|Gatoclass]] ([[User talk:Gatoclass|talk]]) 10:29, 10 October 2016 (UTC)     
 
* With regard to PARAPHRASE, the following sentence in particular is very close to the source" ''Over the years, very few changes were made to the façade of the Grand Theatre, with the brickwork being painted over, a new neon sign added down the length of the façade, and the original ornate metal verandah replaced with a more modern style.'' There are also a number of phrases taken directly from other sources which I think could be reworked, such as "in aid of wounded soldiers", "bailiffs were called in", "taken over by ... bought out the other members". [[User:Gatoclass|Gatoclass]] ([[User talk:Gatoclass|talk]]) 10:29, 10 October 2016 (UTC)     
** Those issues identified above have been addressed. [[User:Dan arndt|Dan arndt]] ([[User talk:Dan arndt|talk]]) 13:02, 10 October 2016 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 05:25, 15 October 2016

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:25, 15 October 2016 (UTC)

Grand Theatre, Perth

  • ALT1:... that ...? Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link], or briefly cite, the source)
  • Reviewed: Clio (Hendrik Goltzius)

Moved to mainspace by Dan arndt (talk). Self-nominated at 09:16, 27 September 2016 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg New, long enough, neutral. Hook is interesting and reliably sourced. Good to go. Citobun (talk) 14:56, 27 September 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg I have pulled this from p6 because of WP:PARAPHRASE issues with at least one of its sources. Gatoclass (talk) 13:22, 9 October 2016 (UTC)
    • Template:Ping Additionally, the QPQ review used does not mention wheter every parargaph of the article has a citation, which is required by DYK rules. Pppery 13:38, 9 October 2016 (UTC)
      • Template:U Whilst I didn't specifically state it in the QPQ review the article in question had several citations for each paragraph. Dan arndt (talk) 15:07, 9 October 2016 (UTC)
  • With regard to PARAPHRASE, the following sentence in particular is very close to the source" Over the years, very few changes were made to the façade of the Grand Theatre, with the brickwork being painted over, a new neon sign added down the length of the façade, and the original ornate metal verandah replaced with a more modern style. There are also a number of phrases taken directly from other sources which I think could be reworked, such as "in aid of wounded soldiers", "bailiffs were called in", "taken over by ... bought out the other members". Gatoclass (talk) 10:29, 10 October 2016 (UTC)
    • Those issues identified above have been addressed. Dan arndt (talk) 13:02, 10 October 2016 (UTC)