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* ... that in one instance, a male '''[[grey-chinned minivet]]''' ''(pair pictured)'' approached a female while holding a flower?  <small>Source: "Pre-mating behaviour by a male slowly approaching a female along branches while holding a (white) flower in its bill ... Copulation followed immediately." [https://books.google.com/books?id=DgZCBAAAQBAJ&pg=PA102 ''The Birds of the Thai-Malay Peninsula'']</small>
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* ... that the male '''[[grey-chinned minivet]]''' ''(pair pictured)'' has been observed approaching a female while holding a flower?  <small>Source: "Pre-mating behaviour by a male slowly approaching a female along branches while holding a (white) flower in its bill ... Copulation followed immediately." [https://books.google.com/books?id=DgZCBAAAQBAJ&pg=PA102 ''The Birds of the Thai-Malay Peninsula'']</small>
** '''ALT1''':... that in one instance, a male '''[[grey-chinned minivet]]''' ''(pair pictured)'' used a flower to attract a female?  <small>Source: same source</small>
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** '''ALT1''':... that the male '''[[grey-chinned minivet]]''' ''(pair pictured)'' has been observed using a flower to attract a female?  <small>Source: same source</small>
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Mudéjar theme park|Mudéjar theme park]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Mudéjar theme park|Mudéjar theme park]]
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Gulumeemee|Gulumeemee]] ([[User talk:Gulumeemee|talk]]). Self-nominated at 04:54, 2 April 2018 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Gulumeemee|Gulumeemee]] ([[User talk:Gulumeemee|talk]]). Self-nominated at 04:54, 2 April 2018 (UTC).</small>
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*'''Comment''' I agree with Umimmak - it would be preferable to change the wording to "has been observed" or "has been recorded", which is more standard usage and avoids the suggestion that this behaviour has only ever happened once. [[User:PaleCloudedWhite|PaleCloudedWhite]] ([[User talk:PaleCloudedWhite|talk]]) 07:18, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
 
*'''Comment''' I agree with Umimmak - it would be preferable to change the wording to "has been observed" or "has been recorded", which is more standard usage and avoids the suggestion that this behaviour has only ever happened once. [[User:PaleCloudedWhite|PaleCloudedWhite]] ([[User talk:PaleCloudedWhite|talk]]) 07:18, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
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:*I have edited the hooks. [[User:Gulumeemee|Gulumeemee]] ([[User talk:Gulumeemee|talk]]) 07:40, 18 April 2018 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 07:40, 18 April 2018

Grey-chinned minivet

A pair of grey-chinned minivets
A pair of grey-chinned minivets
  • ... that the male grey-chinned minivet (pair pictured) has been observed approaching a female while holding a flower? Source: "Pre-mating behaviour by a male slowly approaching a female along branches while holding a (white) flower in its bill ... Copulation followed immediately." The Birds of the Thai-Malay Peninsula
    • ALT1:... that the male grey-chinned minivet (pair pictured) has been observed using a flower to attract a female? Source: same source

5x expanded by Gulumeemee (talk). Self-nominated at 04:54, 2 April 2018 (UTC).

  • Template:Ping
  • long enough (Template:Tq), new enough (Template:Tq). Hasn't been on front page before. Every non-lede paragraph has citations; no apparent copyright violations. Images are appropriately licensed.
  • Hooks interesting, properly formatted, stated in article, and appropriately referenced. Image in article.
  • QPQ done
  • I wonder if better wording might make use of Template:Tq/Template:Tq or something like that instead of Template:Tq? But I guess your wording in the original / ALT1 is fine.
  • Slight preference for Template:Tq over Template:Tq, but I'll leave the decision to the promoter.
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Umimmak (talk) 23:27, 2 April 2018 (UTC)
  • Comment I agree with Umimmak - it would be preferable to change the wording to "has been observed" or "has been recorded", which is more standard usage and avoids the suggestion that this behaviour has only ever happened once. PaleCloudedWhite (talk) 07:18, 18 April 2018 (UTC)