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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I concur with comments from the previous reviewer during the [[Template:Did you know nominations/HMS Simoom (P225)|first nomination]], and attaining GA status has only reinforced the article's quality. All aspects of the article and images are fine. However, the hook could be improved slightly. I suggest {{tq|... that all 15 torpedoes fired by HMS ''Simoom'' ''(pictured)'' during her career missed their targets, but three instead hit and sank a destroyer?}} Additionally, is it necessary to include 'HMS' in the caption? – [[User:Teratix|Tera]]'''[[User talk:Teratix|tix]]''' [[Special:Contributions/Teratix|₵]] 09:49, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 09:49, 8 March 2019

HMS Simoom (P225)

HMS Simoom on the surface
HMS Simoom on the surface
  • Reviewed: Battle of Cape Ecnomus
  • Comment: This nomination has already been approved here; I was forced to renominate it due to an idiotic bureaucratic rule

Improved to Good Article status by L293D (talk) and Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by L293D (talk) at 03:24, 23 February 2019 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg I concur with comments from the previous reviewer during the first nomination, and attaining GA status has only reinforced the article's quality. All aspects of the article and images are fine. However, the hook could be improved slightly. I suggest Template:Tq Additionally, is it necessary to include 'HMS' in the caption? – Teratix 09:49, 8 March 2019 (UTC)