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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 06:41, 10 March 2019 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... <s>that out of 15 torpedoes fired by '''[[HMS Simoom (P225)|HMS ''Simoom'']]''' ''(pictured)'' during her career, all missed their targets, but three instead hit and sank a destroyer?</s>  <small>Source: https://uboat.net/allies/warships/ship/3443.html</small>
 
* ... <s>that out of 15 torpedoes fired by '''[[HMS Simoom (P225)|HMS ''Simoom'']]''' ''(pictured)'' during her career, all missed their targets, but three instead hit and sank a destroyer?</s>  <small>Source: https://uboat.net/allies/warships/ship/3443.html</small>
 
**'''ALT1''': ... that all 15 torpedoes fired by '''[[HMS Simoom (P225)|HMS ''Simoom'']]''' ''(pictured)'' during her career missed their targets, but three instead hit and sank a destroyer?  <small>Source: https://uboat.net/allies/warships/ship/3443.html</small>
 
**'''ALT1''': ... that all 15 torpedoes fired by '''[[HMS Simoom (P225)|HMS ''Simoom'']]''' ''(pictured)'' during her career missed their targets, but three instead hit and sank a destroyer?  <small>Source: https://uboat.net/allies/warships/ship/3443.html</small>
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:* ''Comment'': This nomination has already been approved [[Template:Did you know nominations/HMS Simoom (P225)|here]]; I was forced to renominate it due to an idiotic bureaucratic rule
 
:* ''Comment'': This nomination has already been approved [[Template:Did you know nominations/HMS Simoom (P225)|here]]; I was forced to renominate it due to an idiotic bureaucratic rule
 
<small>Improved to Good Article status by [[User:L293D|L293D]] ([[User talk:L293D|talk]]) and [[User:Sturmvogel 66|Sturmvogel 66]] ([[User talk:Sturmvogel 66|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:L293D|L293D]] ([[User talk:L293D|talk]]) at 03:24, 23 February 2019 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Improved to Good Article status by [[User:L293D|L293D]] ([[User talk:L293D|talk]]) and [[User:Sturmvogel 66|Sturmvogel 66]] ([[User talk:Sturmvogel 66|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:L293D|L293D]] ([[User talk:L293D|talk]]) at 03:24, 23 February 2019 (UTC).</small>
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I concur with comments from the previous reviewer during the [[Template:Did you know nominations/HMS Simoom (P225)|first nomination]], and attaining GA status has only reinforced the article's quality. All aspects of the article and images are fine. However, the hook could be improved slightly. I suggest {{tq|... that all 15 torpedoes fired by HMS ''Simoom'' ''(pictured)'' during her career missed their targets, but three instead hit and sank a destroyer?}} Additionally, is it necessary to include 'HMS' in the caption? – [[User:Teratix|Tera]]'''[[User talk:Teratix|tix]]''' [[Special:Contributions/Teratix|₵]] 09:49, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I concur with comments from the previous reviewer during the [[Template:Did you know nominations/HMS Simoom (P225)|first nomination]], and attaining GA status has only reinforced the article's quality. All aspects of the article and images are fine. However, the hook could be improved slightly. I suggest {{tq|... that all 15 torpedoes fired by HMS ''Simoom'' ''(pictured)'' during her career missed their targets, but three instead hit and sank a destroyer?}} Additionally, is it necessary to include 'HMS' in the caption? – [[User:Teratix|Tera]]'''[[User talk:Teratix|tix]]''' [[Special:Contributions/Teratix|₵]] 09:49, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
 
::*Good suggestions, I'v made a new ALT and modified the image caption. <span style="text-shadow:#396 0.2em 0.2em 0.5em; class=texhtml">[[User:L293D|<b style="color:#060">L293D</b>]]&nbsp;([[User talk:L293D#top|<b style="color:#000">☎</b>]]&nbsp;•&nbsp;[[Special:Contributions/L293D|<b style="color:#000">✎</b>]])</span> 12:56, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
 
::*Good suggestions, I'v made a new ALT and modified the image caption. <span style="text-shadow:#396 0.2em 0.2em 0.5em; class=texhtml">[[User:L293D|<b style="color:#060">L293D</b>]]&nbsp;([[User talk:L293D#top|<b style="color:#000">☎</b>]]&nbsp;•&nbsp;[[Special:Contributions/L293D|<b style="color:#000">✎</b>]])</span> 12:56, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
 
:::*[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Excellent, ALT1 is good to go. – [[User:Teratix|Tera]]'''[[User talk:Teratix|tix]]''' [[Special:Contributions/Teratix|₵]] 13:44, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
 
:::*[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Excellent, ALT1 is good to go. – [[User:Teratix|Tera]]'''[[User talk:Teratix|tix]]''' [[Special:Contributions/Teratix|₵]] 13:44, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 06:41, 10 March 2019

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:41, 10 March 2019 (UTC)

HMS Simoom (P225)

Simoom on the surface
Simoom on the surface
  • Reviewed: Battle of Cape Ecnomus
  • Comment: This nomination has already been approved here; I was forced to renominate it due to an idiotic bureaucratic rule

Improved to Good Article status by L293D (talk) and Sturmvogel 66 (talk). Nominated by L293D (talk) at 03:24, 23 February 2019 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg I concur with comments from the previous reviewer during the first nomination, and attaining GA status has only reinforced the article's quality. All aspects of the article and images are fine. However, the hook could be improved slightly. I suggest Template:Tq Additionally, is it necessary to include 'HMS' in the caption? – Teratix 09:49, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
  • Good suggestions, I'v made a new ALT and modified the image caption. L293D ( • ) 12:56, 8 March 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol voting keep.svg Excellent, ALT1 is good to go. – Teratix 13:44, 8 March 2019 (UTC)