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* ... that '''[[Harley Gaber]]'''{{`s}} ''(pictured)'' [[magnum opus]], ''Die Plage'', a historical narrative about Germany, consisted of 5,000 canvases?
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* <s>... that '''[[Harley Gaber]]'''{{`s}} ''(pictured)'' [[magnum opus]], ''Die Plage'', a historical narrative about Germany, consisted of 5,000 canvases?</s>
 
:* ''Reviewed'':[[Template:Did you know nominations/Nydala Abbey]]
 
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::*''Comment'': First article and first nomination for the user
 
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Let me suggest a slight adjustment
 
Let me suggest a slight adjustment
:'''ALT1''' * ... that '''[[Harley Gaber]]'''{{`s}} ''(pictured)'' [[magnum opus]], ''Die Plage'', is a historical narrative of modern Germany comprising 5000 canvases?
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:'''ALT1''' * <s>... that '''[[Harley Gaber]]'''{{`s}} ''(pictured)'' [[magnum opus]], ''Die Plage'', is a historical narrative of modern Germany comprising 5000 canvases?</s>
 
:*''Comment:'' {{reply to|User:EEng}} Is this use in line with [[User:Giraffedata|Giraffedata]]'s [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia Signpost/2015-02-25/In the media|much noted quest]] to get rid of "comprised of"? <small>(Please sign your posts.)</small> - [[User:W.carter|<em style="font-family:Verdana;color:DarkBlue">w.carter</em>]]<small>[[User talk:W.carter|'''<em style="font-family:Verdana;color:DarkBlue">-Talk</em>''']]</small> 06:49, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
 
:*''Comment:'' {{reply to|User:EEng}} Is this use in line with [[User:Giraffedata|Giraffedata]]'s [[Wikipedia:Wikipedia Signpost/2015-02-25/In the media|much noted quest]] to get rid of "comprised of"? <small>(Please sign your posts.)</small> - [[User:W.carter|<em style="font-family:Verdana;color:DarkBlue">w.carter</em>]]<small>[[User talk:W.carter|'''<em style="font-family:Verdana;color:DarkBlue">-Talk</em>''']]</small> 06:49, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
 
:::Well, it's in line with it, but was not prompted by it. I ignore all mammals taller than I am. [[User:EEng|EEng]] ([[User talk:EEng|talk]]) 09:37, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
 
:::Well, it's in line with it, but was not prompted by it. I ignore all mammals taller than I am. [[User:EEng|EEng]] ([[User talk:EEng|talk]]) 09:37, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
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{{od|4}}Hi [[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]], nice to meet you again. How about this ALT? I know I cant use your exact words or I'll get my fingers slapped once again. ( I happened to make that mistake not long ago...) [[User:W.carter|<em style="font-family:Verdana;color:DarkBlue">w.carter</em>]]<small>[[User talk:W.carter|'''<em style="font-family:Verdana;color:DarkBlue">-Talk</em>''']]</small> 20:51, 1 May 2015 (UTC)
 
{{od|4}}Hi [[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]], nice to meet you again. How about this ALT? I know I cant use your exact words or I'll get my fingers slapped once again. ( I happened to make that mistake not long ago...) [[User:W.carter|<em style="font-family:Verdana;color:DarkBlue">w.carter</em>]]<small>[[User talk:W.carter|'''<em style="font-family:Verdana;color:DarkBlue">-Talk</em>''']]</small> 20:51, 1 May 2015 (UTC)
 
*'''ALT2''' ... that ''Die Plage'', created by composer and visual artist '''[[Harley Gaber]]''' ''(pictured)'', is a historical narrative of Germany from the [[Weimar Republic]] to the end of World War II in 5,000 canvases?
 
*'''ALT2''' ... that ''Die Plage'', created by composer and visual artist '''[[Harley Gaber]]''' ''(pictured)'', is a historical narrative of Germany from the [[Weimar Republic]] to the end of World War II in 5,000 canvases?
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:: '''ALT3''' ... that ''Die Plage'', created in 5,000 canvases by the composer and visual artist '''[[Harley Gaber]]''' ''(pictured)'', is a historical narrative of Germany from the [[Weimar Republic]] to the end of World War II?
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:: [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] offline sources accepted AGF, image expressive and free, --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 21:02, 1 May 2015 (UTC)
  
  
 
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Revision as of 21:03, 1 May 2015

Harley Gaber

Harley Gaber in 2009

  • Comment: First article and first nomination for the user

Created by Morees68 (talk). Nominated by W.carter (talk) at 18:55, 7 April 2015 (UTC).

  • Fixed Of course!! (#¤%&@%! typo) Thank you for noticing. Face-blush.svg w.carter-Talk 19:34, 7 April 2015 (UTC)

Let me suggest a slight adjustment

ALT1 * ... that Harley GaberTemplate:`s (pictured) magnum opus, Die Plage, is a historical narrative of modern Germany comprising 5000 canvases?
Well, it's in line with it, but was not prompted by it. I ignore all mammals taller than I am. EEng (talk) 09:37, 13 April 2015 (UTC)
Symbol question.svg Substantial, detailed article on an interesting subject, on good sources. I am not so happy with the hooks, espececially the '"pictured" in between his name and his creation. I would also be interested in mentioning that he stopped composing, to point out his double talent. Weimar Republic to end of World War II would be more to the point and more interesting than "modern Germany" (which says about nothing). magnum opus and its link detract from our subject. A link to Germany is not needed. My wording would be something like ... that the composer and visual artist Harley Gaber (pictured) created Die Plage, a historical narrative of Germany from the Weimar Republic to end of World War II in 5000 canvases?
But please: you word it, or I can't approve it, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:19, 1 May 2015 (UTC)

Template:OdHi Gerda Arendt, nice to meet you again. How about this ALT? I know I cant use your exact words or I'll get my fingers slapped once again. ( I happened to make that mistake not long ago...) w.carter-Talk 20:51, 1 May 2015 (UTC)

  • ALT2 ... that Die Plage, created by composer and visual artist Harley Gaber (pictured), is a historical narrative of Germany from the Weimar Republic to the end of World War II in 5,000 canvases?
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ALT3 ... that Die Plage, created in 5,000 canvases by the composer and visual artist Harley Gaber (pictured), is a historical narrative of Germany from the Weimar Republic to the end of World War II?
Symbol voting keep.svg offline sources accepted AGF, image expressive and free, --Gerda Arendt (talk) 21:02, 1 May 2015 (UTC)