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| − | * ... that players attempt to win the love of the young, attractive [[Colonel Sanders]] in '''''[[I Love You Colonel Sanders!]]'''''? | + | * <s>... that players attempt to win the love of the young, attractive [[Colonel Sanders]] in '''''[[I Love You Colonel Sanders!]]'''''? </s> <small>Source: "Things got even weirder when the game was revealed to be a dating simulator with Colonel Sanders as the prized companion." ([https://www.businessinsider.com/kfc-dating-game-sim-i-love-you-colonel-sanders-2019-9 "I played KFC's bizarre Colonel Sanders dating game so you don't have to"])</small> |
:* ''Reviewed'': Exempt, less than 5 DYKs in my life | :* ''Reviewed'': Exempt, less than 5 DYKs in my life | ||
<small>Created/expanded by [[User:Akrabbim|Akrabbim]] ([[User talk:Akrabbim|talk]]). Self-nominated at 20:33, 4 February 2020 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created/expanded by [[User:Akrabbim|Akrabbim]] ([[User talk:Akrabbim|talk]]). Self-nominated at 20:33, 4 February 2020 (UTC).</small> | ||
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::*I just looked over the article. While it is true that Colonel Sanders is a real-life person, the hook is written in a way that obscures that. A tweak of the hook wording would solve it. Alternately, the bolded link could be piped to say what it is (a dating sim). Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:37, 11 February 2020 (UTC) | ::*I just looked over the article. While it is true that Colonel Sanders is a real-life person, the hook is written in a way that obscures that. A tweak of the hook wording would solve it. Alternately, the bolded link could be piped to say what it is (a dating sim). Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:37, 11 February 2020 (UTC) | ||
::::Hmm, how about this? —[[User:Akrabbim|'''A'''ᴋʀᴀʙʙıᴍ]] <sup>[[User talk:Akrabbim|talk]]</sup> 21:48, 11 February 2020 (UTC) | ::::Hmm, how about this? —[[User:Akrabbim|'''A'''ᴋʀᴀʙʙıᴍ]] <sup>[[User talk:Akrabbim|talk]]</sup> 21:48, 11 February 2020 (UTC) | ||
| − | ::::*'''ALT1:''' ... that the young, attractive, and date-able portrayal of [[Colonel Sanders]] in '''''[[I Love You Colonel Sanders!]]''''' is part of an effort by [[KFC]] to make the Colonel a "part of pop-culture"? | + | ::::*'''ALT1:'''<s> ... that the young, attractive, and date-able portrayal of [[Colonel Sanders]] in '''''[[I Love You Colonel Sanders!]]''''' is part of an effort by [[KFC]] to make the Colonel a "part of pop-culture"?</s> |
:::::*OK, but what about removing the repetition? | :::::*OK, but what about removing the repetition? | ||
:::::*'''ALT2''': ... that the young, attractive, and date-able portrayal of [[Colonel Sanders]] in '''[[I Love You Colonel Sanders!|a parody dating sim]]''' is part of an effort by [[KFC]] to make the Colonel a "part of pop culture"? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:58, 11 February 2020 (UTC) | :::::*'''ALT2''': ... that the young, attractive, and date-able portrayal of [[Colonel Sanders]] in '''[[I Love You Colonel Sanders!|a parody dating sim]]''' is part of an effort by [[KFC]] to make the Colonel a "part of pop culture"? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:58, 11 February 2020 (UTC) | ||
::::::*You could also turn around the wording in ALT0: | ::::::*You could also turn around the wording in ALT0: | ||
| − | ::::::*'''ALT0a''': ... that in a 2019 '''[[I Love You Colonel Sanders!|parody dating sim]]''' commissioned by [[KFC]], players attempt to win the love of the young, attractive [[Colonel Sanders]]? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:03, 11 February 2020 (UTC) | + | ::::::*'''ALT0a''':<s> ... that in a 2019 '''[[I Love You Colonel Sanders!|parody dating sim]]''' commissioned by [[KFC]], players attempt to win the love of the young, attractive [[Colonel Sanders]]?</s> [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:03, 11 February 2020 (UTC) |
::::::::I don't see how ALT2 is an improvement over ALT1, but I'm fine with it if you think it's better. I think it's hookier than ALT0 and 0a. —[[User:Akrabbim|'''A'''ᴋʀᴀʙʙıᴍ]] <sup>[[User talk:Akrabbim|talk]]</sup> 22:07, 11 February 2020 (UTC) | ::::::::I don't see how ALT2 is an improvement over ALT1, but I'm fine with it if you think it's better. I think it's hookier than ALT0 and 0a. —[[User:Akrabbim|'''A'''ᴋʀᴀʙʙıᴍ]] <sup>[[User talk:Akrabbim|talk]]</sup> 22:07, 11 February 2020 (UTC) | ||
| − | + | :::::::::*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] Well, ALT1 has the word {{tq|Colonel}} three times and {{tq|Sanders}} twice. ALT2 has two {{tq|Colonel}} and one {{tq|Sanders}} :) Pinging {{ping|RoySmith}} to review ALT2. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:20, 11 February 2020 (UTC) | |
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I Love You Colonel Sanders!
... that players attempt to win the love of the young, attractive Colonel Sanders in I Love You Colonel Sanders!?Source: "Things got even weirder when the game was revealed to be a dating simulator with Colonel Sanders as the prized companion." ("I played KFC's bizarre Colonel Sanders dating game so you don't have to")
- Reviewed: Exempt, less than 5 DYKs in my life
Created/expanded by Akrabbim (talk). Self-nominated at 20:33, 4 February 2020 (UTC).
Unless I'm missing something, this was last edited on 15 December 2019, and submitted to DYK on 4 February 2020, so it fails the newness criteria of WP:DYKRULES. -- RoySmith (talk) 03:56, 6 February 2020 (UTC)
- Oh, no, wait. I was reviewing the wrong article. I was looking at Colonel Sanders, not I Love You Colonel Sanders!. -- RoySmith (talk) 03:58, 6 February 2020 (UTC)
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This hook falls short of Rule C6. It is all plot. Please provide a new hook. Yoninah (talk) 21:34, 11 February 2020 (UTC)
- I just looked over the article. While it is true that Colonel Sanders is a real-life person, the hook is written in a way that obscures that. A tweak of the hook wording would solve it. Alternately, the bolded link could be piped to say what it is (a dating sim). Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 21:37, 11 February 2020 (UTC)
- Hmm, how about this? —Aᴋʀᴀʙʙıᴍ talk 21:48, 11 February 2020 (UTC)
- ALT1:
... that the young, attractive, and date-able portrayal of Colonel Sanders in I Love You Colonel Sanders! is part of an effort by KFC to make the Colonel a "part of pop-culture"?
- OK, but what about removing the repetition?
- ALT2: ... that the young, attractive, and date-able portrayal of Colonel Sanders in a parody dating sim is part of an effort by KFC to make the Colonel a "part of pop culture"? Yoninah (talk) 21:58, 11 February 2020 (UTC)
- You could also turn around the wording in ALT0:
- ALT0a:
... that in a 2019 parody dating sim commissioned by KFC, players attempt to win the love of the young, attractive Colonel Sanders?Yoninah (talk) 22:03, 11 February 2020 (UTC)
- I don't see how ALT2 is an improvement over ALT1, but I'm fine with it if you think it's better. I think it's hookier than ALT0 and 0a. —Aᴋʀᴀʙʙıᴍ talk 22:07, 11 February 2020 (UTC)
Well, ALT1 has the word Template:Tq three times and Template:Tq twice. ALT2 has two Template:Tq and one Template:Tq :) Pinging Template:Ping to review ALT2. Yoninah (talk) 22:20, 11 February 2020 (UTC)
- I don't see how ALT2 is an improvement over ALT1, but I'm fine with it if you think it's better. I think it's hookier than ALT0 and 0a. —Aᴋʀᴀʙʙıᴍ talk 22:07, 11 February 2020 (UTC)
- ALT1:
- Hmm, how about this? —Aᴋʀᴀʙʙıᴍ talk 21:48, 11 February 2020 (UTC)