Difference between revisions of "Template:Did you know nominations/Ijeoma Oluo"
Jump to navigation
Jump to search
imported>Shameran81 (commented) |
imported>Epicgenius (reply) |
||
| Line 15: | Line 15: | ||
--> | --> | ||
| − | * ... that Seattle author '''[[Ijeoma Oluo]]''' has sparked uncomfortable conversations nationwide about [[racism]], [[misogynoir]], [[intersectionality]], [[Black Lives Matter]], and the [[Me Too movement|#MeToo]] movement? | + | * <s>... that Seattle author '''[[Ijeoma Oluo]]''' has sparked uncomfortable conversations nationwide about [[racism]], [[misogynoir]], [[intersectionality]], [[Black Lives Matter]], and the [[Me Too movement|#MeToo]] movement?</s> |
| + | ** <s>'''ALT1''': ...that many of Seattle author '''[[Ijeoma Oluo]]'''<nowiki/>'s articles about racism, misogynoir, intersectionality, Black Lives Matter, and the #MeToo movement have gone viral?</s> | ||
| + | ** '''ALT2''': ...that after the shooting of Trayvon Martin, Seattle author '''[[Ijeoma Oluo]]''' started writing about her social concerns on a blog that she had devoted to food writing? | ||
| + | ** <s>'''ALT3''': ...that the Facebook account of Seattle author '''[[Ijeoma Oluo]]''' was temporarily suspended after she posted screenshots of racist messages directed toward her?</s> | ||
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Harisal]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Harisal]] | ||
<small>5x expanded by [[User:Antonioatrylia|Antonioatrylia]] ([[User talk:Antonioatrylia|talk]]), [[User:Dennis Bratland|Dennis Bratland]] ([[User talk:Dennis Bratland|talk]]), [[User:Innisfree987|Innisfree987]] ([[User talk:Innisfree987|talk]]), [[User:Lonehexagon|Lonehexagon]] ([[User talk:Lonehexagon|talk]]), and [[User:Monikasj|Monikasj]] ([[User talk:Monikasj|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Dennis Bratland|Dennis Bratland]] ([[User talk:Dennis Bratland|talk]]) at 18:54, 6 February 2018 (UTC).</small> | <small>5x expanded by [[User:Antonioatrylia|Antonioatrylia]] ([[User talk:Antonioatrylia|talk]]), [[User:Dennis Bratland|Dennis Bratland]] ([[User talk:Dennis Bratland|talk]]), [[User:Innisfree987|Innisfree987]] ([[User talk:Innisfree987|talk]]), [[User:Lonehexagon|Lonehexagon]] ([[User talk:Lonehexagon|talk]]), and [[User:Monikasj|Monikasj]] ([[User talk:Monikasj|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Dennis Bratland|Dennis Bratland]] ([[User talk:Dennis Bratland|talk]]) at 18:54, 6 February 2018 (UTC).</small> | ||
| Line 35: | Line 38: | ||
|neutral = y | |neutral = y | ||
|plagiarismfree = y | |plagiarismfree = y | ||
| − | |policyother = | + | |policyother = <!--Moved below--> |
| − | |hookcited = | + | |hookcited = y<!--Moved below--> |
| − | |hookinterest = See below. | + | |hookinterest = y<!--See below.--> |
| − | |hookother = | + | |hookother = <!--Moved below--> |
| − | |||
| − | |||
| − | |||
|picfree = y | |picfree = y | ||
|picused = y | |picused = y | ||
|picclear = y | |picclear = y | ||
|qpq = y | |qpq = y | ||
| − | |status = | + | |status = y |
|comments = | |comments = | ||
|sign = [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 02:08, 14 February 2018 (UTC) | |sign = [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 02:08, 14 February 2018 (UTC) | ||
}} | }} | ||
}} | }} | ||
| + | |||
| + | *<s>In "Accolades", you might want to reword {{tq|Oluo has been named to lists of was}}. I don't understand what this means.</s> | ||
| + | :<s>Hook interest: I'm not sure, because this isn't mentioned explicitly in the article. However, it might be a problem with this hook itself. See directly below.</s> | ||
| + | :<s>The words used in this hook imply something else than what is in the article. While Oluo might definitely have "sparked" "uncomfortable" conversations, I don't think this is objective enough. The page says {{tq|Her writing covers misogynoir, intersectionality, online harassment, the Black Lives Matter movement, race, economics, parenting, feminism and social justice}}, which <u>''is''</u> sourced. So I suggest this:</s> (See above. [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 02:08, 14 February 2018 (UTC)) | ||
* I rewrote the ''Accolades'' section using more straightforward wording. Any of he suggested alternate hooks is fine. --[[User:Dennis Bratland|Dennis Bratland]] ([[User talk:Dennis Bratland|talk]]) 03:40, 14 February 2018 (UTC) | * I rewrote the ''Accolades'' section using more straightforward wording. Any of he suggested alternate hooks is fine. --[[User:Dennis Bratland|Dennis Bratland]] ([[User talk:Dennis Bratland|talk]]) 03:40, 14 February 2018 (UTC) | ||
| Line 56: | Line 60: | ||
* Thanks for the review, and for all the work that everyone has done on this page. Any of the suggested hooks would be fine, but I prefer ALT2. [[User:Shameran81|Shameran81]] ([[User talk:Shameran81|talk]]) 03:52, 14 February 2018 (UTC) | * Thanks for the review, and for all the work that everyone has done on this page. Any of the suggested hooks would be fine, but I prefer ALT2. [[User:Shameran81|Shameran81]] ([[User talk:Shameran81|talk]]) 03:52, 14 February 2018 (UTC) | ||
| + | *{{re|Dennis Bratland|Shameran81}} OK, I have picked ALT2. I have also moved the alt hooks to the top of the page. Unless any of the other contributors have objections, this is good to go. [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 14:16, 14 February 2018 (UTC) | ||
<!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> | <!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> | ||
Revision as of 14:16, 14 February 2018
| DYK toolbox |
|---|
Ijeoma Oluo
... that Seattle author Ijeoma Oluo has sparked uncomfortable conversations nationwide about racism, misogynoir, intersectionality, Black Lives Matter, and the #MeToo movement?ALT1: ...that many of Seattle author Ijeoma Oluo's articles about racism, misogynoir, intersectionality, Black Lives Matter, and the #MeToo movement have gone viral?- ALT2: ...that after the shooting of Trayvon Martin, Seattle author Ijeoma Oluo started writing about her social concerns on a blog that she had devoted to food writing?
ALT3: ...that the Facebook account of Seattle author Ijeoma Oluo was temporarily suspended after she posted screenshots of racist messages directed toward her?
5x expanded by Antonioatrylia (talk), Dennis Bratland (talk), Innisfree987 (talk), Lonehexagon (talk), and Monikasj (talk). Nominated by Dennis Bratland (talk) at 18:54, 6 February 2018 (UTC).
Lua error: expandTemplate: template "y" does not exist.
In "Accolades", you might want to reword Template:Tq. I don't understand what this means.
Hook interest: I'm not sure, because this isn't mentioned explicitly in the article. However, it might be a problem with this hook itself. See directly below.The words used in this hook imply something else than what is in the article. While Oluo might definitely have "sparked" "uncomfortable" conversations, I don't think this is objective enough. The page says Template:Tq, which is sourced. So I suggest this:(See above. epicgenius (talk) 02:08, 14 February 2018 (UTC))
- I rewrote the Accolades section using more straightforward wording. Any of he suggested alternate hooks is fine. --Dennis Bratland (talk) 03:40, 14 February 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review, and for all the work that everyone has done on this page. Any of the suggested hooks would be fine, but I prefer ALT2. Shameran81 (talk) 03:52, 14 February 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Re OK, I have picked ALT2. I have also moved the alt hooks to the top of the page. Unless any of the other contributors have objections, this is good to go. epicgenius (talk) 14:16, 14 February 2018 (UTC)
