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| + | :*Sources look sufficiently reliable. The book seems a little light on the scholarship end, but it isn't an essential source for too much of the article. | ||
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| + | :*For the hook, it might make it more interesting to give Indian's reason, making Harley-Davidson's decision look foolish | ||
| + | :'''ALT1''' = "... that in 1917, the year [[Indian (motorcycle)|Indian]] discontinued its '''[[Indian Model O|Model O]]''' [[flat-twin engine|flat-twin]] motorcycle ''(pictured)'' because of poor sales, [[Harley-Davidson]] introduced a [[Harley-Davidson Model W|flat-twin motorcycle]]?" What is your opinion of this hook? | ||
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| + | :[[User:Chris857|Chris857]] ([[User talk:Chris857|talk]]) 00:24, 15 May 2013 (UTC) | ||
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Indian Model O
- ... that in 1917, the year Indian discontinued its Model O flat-twin motorcycle (pictured), Harley-Davidson introduced a flat-twin motorcycle?
- Reviewed: María Jesús Alvarado Rivera
- Comment: Article created in my userspace on 6 May, moved to mainspace on 12 May.
Created by SamBlob (talk). Self nominated at 15:22, 12 May 2013 (UTC).
- New article moved from mainspace a couple days ago, 2315 chars
- QPQ done
- Images are PD
- Hook is sufficiently brief, and verified
- Article is cited inline
- Sources look sufficiently reliable. The book seems a little light on the scholarship end, but it isn't an essential source for too much of the article.
- Sources verify my spotchecks of the article, and duplication detector found no significant copying or paraphrase
- Issues/Suggestions
- For the hook, it might make it more interesting to give Indian's reason, making Harley-Davidson's decision look foolish
- ALT1 = "... that in 1917, the year Indian discontinued its Model O flat-twin motorcycle (pictured) because of poor sales, Harley-Davidson introduced a flat-twin motorcycle?" What is your opinion of this hook?