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:'''ALT1''' = "... that in 1917, the year [[Indian (motorcycle)|Indian]] discontinued its '''[[Indian Model O|Model O]]''' [[flat-twin engine|flat-twin]] motorcycle ''(pictured)'' because of poor sales, [[Harley-Davidson]] introduced a [[Harley-Davidson Model W|flat-twin motorcycle]]?" What is your opinion of this hook?
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Revision as of 00:24, 15 May 2013

Indian Model O

Illustration of an Indian Model O motorcycle from the April 1917 issue of Popular Mechanics

  • Comment: Article created in my userspace on 6 May, moved to mainspace on 12 May.

Created by SamBlob (talk). Self nominated at 15:22, 12 May 2013 (UTC).

  • New article moved from mainspace a couple days ago, 2315 chars
  • QPQ done
  • Images are PD
  • Hook is sufficiently brief, and verified
  • Article is cited inline
  • Sources look sufficiently reliable. The book seems a little light on the scholarship end, but it isn't an essential source for too much of the article.
  • Sources verify my spotchecks of the article, and duplication detector found no significant copying or paraphrase
Issues/Suggestions
  • For the hook, it might make it more interesting to give Indian's reason, making Harley-Davidson's decision look foolish
ALT1 = "... that in 1917, the year Indian discontinued its Model O flat-twin motorcycle (pictured) because of poor sales, Harley-Davidson introduced a flat-twin motorcycle?" What is your opinion of this hook?
Chris857 (talk) 00:24, 15 May 2013 (UTC)