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:::*'''ALT2:''' ... that the '''[[Indian National Theatre]]''' troupe traveled by two lorries and used them for a stage in their early years? | :::*'''ALT2:''' ... that the '''[[Indian National Theatre]]''' troupe traveled by two lorries and used them for a stage in their early years? | ||
+ | *[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Okay, here's the rest of my review: it meets all the requirements of newness and length. Article is stable, adequately sourced, and free from close paraphrasing. QPQ provided. Nominator has provided an ALT2 which I personally prefer to ALT0. As I mentioned before, ALT0 is borderline interesting, but other editors may feel otherwise, so I'm deferring the final choice to the promoter. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 12:59, 10 July 2018 (UTC) | ||
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Indian National Theatre
... that the Indian National Theatre produced a Gujarati children's play on Bakor Patel, an anthropomorphic goat character? Source: Lal, Ananda (2004). The Oxford companion to Indian theatre. New Delhi: Oxford University Press. doi:10.1093/acref/9780195644463.001.0001/acref-9780195644463-e-0220. ISBN 0195644468. OCLC 56986659
ALT1: ... that the Indian National Theatre produced W. Somerset Maugham's play The Sacred FlameSource: Baradi, Hasmukh (2003) [1997]. "New Theatre: Phase Two: Theatre Troupe (1939-1949)". History of Gujarati theatre (English 1st ed.). New Delhi: National Book Trust, India. p. 143. ISBN 8123740328. OCLC 56096332
- Reviewed: Hedgewar Smruti Mandir
Created by Nizil Shah (talk). Self-nominated at 13:49, 6 June 2018 (UTC).
A full review will follow, but right now there are some issues with the nomination and the article. First, the article's content, in particular the "Activities" section, read like borderline-promotional material. Secondly, I've struck ALT1 as not really being interesting. ALT0 is borderline interesting and may not be appreciated by those unfamiliar with Indian media. Hooks with a broader appeal may need to be proposed here: for example, hooks about the theatre's link to the Quit India movement, or how some of their early performances were done on lorries, might be catchier. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 04:48, 27 June 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Ping, The article is under review and corrections by another editor so it took long to proceed further. Meanwhile I am suggesting a new hook.-Nizil (talk) 05:31, 10 July 2018 (UTC)
- ALT2: ... that the Indian National Theatre troupe traveled by two lorries and used them for a stage in their early years?
Okay, here's the rest of my review: it meets all the requirements of newness and length. Article is stable, adequately sourced, and free from close paraphrasing. QPQ provided. Nominator has provided an ALT2 which I personally prefer to ALT0. As I mentioned before, ALT0 is borderline interesting, but other editors may feel otherwise, so I'm deferring the final choice to the promoter. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 12:59, 10 July 2018 (UTC)