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:* {{re|Biochemistry&Love}} My review is attached below. [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 19:17, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
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|length      = Somehow, I only see 4547 characters (755 words) of "readable prose size". The bullet points are not counted as prose. However, I'm reluctant to fail this nomination due to some bureaucratic limit that you barely missed. For this to be eligible for DYK, I suppose that you can convert the bullet points to prose.
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Revision as of 19:17, 1 May 2018

Interrupted aortic arch

  • ... that an interrupted aortic arch isn't what happens when the aorta is rudely intruded upon? Source: "Interrupted aortic arch (IAA) is a relatively rare genetic disorder." (source)
    • ALT1:... that an interrupted aortic arch is rapidly lethal, but it can be fixed by surgery? Source: "...if the condition is left untreated, 90% of the affected infants die at a median age of 4 days..." (PMID 12075868); "Survival is not possible without surgery. By comparison, survival after complete repair of the aortic arch and ventricular septal defect in the newborn period is 90 percent or greater in most pediatric heart centers." (source, under the "Surgery" tab)
  • Reviewed: Sword Art Online
  • Comment: Expanded from about 940 characters to about 4860 characters (5.17x expansion).

5x expanded by Biochemistry&Love (talk). Self-nominated at 19:44, 28 April 2018 (UTC).

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