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:*Hook and content check out.  Should Cleo in the article link to [[Cleo (magazine)]]?  It currently links to a DAB page.  I only ask this because I think it might be necessary to link it in the hook.  I had no idea what the Victorian Cleo Bachelor of the Year was.  After finding the magazine, I take that it is similar to GQ.  In addition, he was only a finalist, so it might be better to discuss that prior to his disablement he worked as a plumber.  The plumber story is interesting, but I can't think of an incredibly hooky way to say it.  In any case, everything [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] checks out.  I'd just like to see a thought on the lead.  (You may want to create a DAB at [[JACK Swift]] while you are at it.&nbsp;[[User:Ryan Vesey|'''''Ryan''''']]&nbsp;[[User talk:Ryan Vesey|'''''Vesey''''']]&nbsp;[[Special:Contributions/Ryan Vesey|<small>Review me!</small>]] 05:04, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
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:*Hook and content check out.  Should Cleo in the article link to [[Cleo (magazine)]]?  It currently links to a DAB page.  I only ask this because I think it might be necessary to link it in the hook.  I had no idea what the Victorian Cleo Bachelor of the Year was.  After finding the magazine, I take that it is similar to GQ.  In addition, he was only a finalist, so it might be better to discuss that prior to his disablement he worked as a plumber.  The plumber story is interesting, but I can't think of an incredibly hooky way to say it.  In any case, everything [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] checks out.  I'd just like to see a thought on the lead.  (You may want to create a DAB at [[Jack Swift]] while you are at it.&nbsp;[[User:Ryan Vesey|'''''Ryan''''']]&nbsp;[[User talk:Ryan Vesey|'''''Vesey''''']]&nbsp;[[Special:Contributions/Ryan Vesey|<small>Review me!</small>]] 05:04, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
  
  
 
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Revision as of 05:05, 24 July 2012

Jack Swift (athlete)

  • Reviewed: Dock Ellis
  • Comment: Save for the Paralympics? Moved from user space.

Created/expanded by LauraHale (talk). Self nom at 09:24, 23 July 2012 (UTC)

  • Hook and content check out. Should Cleo in the article link to Cleo (magazine)? It currently links to a DAB page. I only ask this because I think it might be necessary to link it in the hook. I had no idea what the Victorian Cleo Bachelor of the Year was. After finding the magazine, I take that it is similar to GQ. In addition, he was only a finalist, so it might be better to discuss that prior to his disablement he worked as a plumber. The plumber story is interesting, but I can't think of an incredibly hooky way to say it. In any case, everything 16px checks out. I'd just like to see a thought on the lead. (You may want to create a DAB at Jack Swift while you are at it. Ryan Vesey Review me! 05:04, 24 July 2012 (UTC)