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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:55, 30 April 2016 (UTC)<br />
 
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====James Walsh (convict)====
 
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* ... that convict '''[[James Walsh (convict)|James Walsh]]''' drew intricate artworks on his Australian prison cell wall that were discovered by accident almost a century later?
 
* ... that convict '''[[James Walsh (convict)|James Walsh]]''' drew intricate artworks on his Australian prison cell wall that were discovered by accident almost a century later?
  
 
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<small>Created/expanded by [[User:Ghostieguide|Ghostieguide]] ([[User talk:Ghostieguide|talk]]). Self-nominated at 11:24, 7 April 2016 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created/expanded by [[User:Ghostieguide|Ghostieguide]] ([[User talk:Ghostieguide|talk]]). Self-nominated at 11:24, 7 April 2016 (UTC).</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] New enough, nominator exempt from QPQ requirement per QPQ check [https://tools.wmflabs.org/betacommand-dev/cgi-bin/dyk.py?user=Ghostieguide results], checks for copyvio reveal no problems (e.g. [https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=James+Walsh+%28convict%29&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0]). Matters that need to be addressed:
 
:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] New enough, nominator exempt from QPQ requirement per QPQ check [https://tools.wmflabs.org/betacommand-dev/cgi-bin/dyk.py?user=Ghostieguide results], checks for copyvio reveal no problems (e.g. [https://tools.wmflabs.org/copyvios/?lang=en&project=wikipedia&title=James+Walsh+%28convict%29&oldid=&action=search&use_engine=1&use_links=1&turnitin=0]). Matters that need to be addressed:
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::::*Expanded and added references.. Hope it helps.[[User:Ghostieguide|Ghostieguide]] ([[User talk:Ghostieguide|talk]]) 10:26, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
 
::::*Expanded and added references.. Hope it helps.[[User:Ghostieguide|Ghostieguide]] ([[User talk:Ghostieguide|talk]]) 10:26, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
 
:::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Now long enough but the phrasing of the hook fact in the article, "prison officer knocked off some whitewash while moving something", uses the exact words of the source, but is not marked as a quote. All article content needs to be in your own words, not copied, and not closely paraphrased. —[[User:David Eppstein|David Eppstein]] ([[User talk:David Eppstein|talk]]) 07:32, 29 April 2016 (UTC)
 
:::::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Now long enough but the phrasing of the hook fact in the article, "prison officer knocked off some whitewash while moving something", uses the exact words of the source, but is not marked as a quote. All article content needs to be in your own words, not copied, and not closely paraphrased. —[[User:David Eppstein|David Eppstein]] ([[User talk:David Eppstein|talk]]) 07:32, 29 April 2016 (UTC)
::::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] All remaining issues handled. Earwig found no other copyvio. Good to go. —[[User:David Eppstein|David Eppstein]] ([[User talk:David Eppstein|talk]]) 19:36, 30 April 2016 (UTC)
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::::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] All remaining issues handled. Earwig found no other copyvio. Good to go. —[[User:David Eppstein|David Eppstein]] ([[User talk:David Eppstein|talk]]) 19:36, 30 April 2016 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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Revision as of 21:55, 30 April 2016

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:55, 30 April 2016 (UTC)

James Walsh (convict)

  • ... that convict James Walsh drew intricate artworks on his Australian prison cell wall that were discovered by accident almost a century later?

Created/expanded by Ghostieguide (talk). Self-nominated at 11:24, 7 April 2016 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg New enough, nominator exempt from QPQ requirement per QPQ check results, checks for copyvio reveal no problems (e.g. [1]). Matters that need to be addressed:
  • Article is not long enough, presently at 1178 characters. Per WP:WIADYK #2a it must have at least 1,500 characters
  • No hook is proposed herein
  • All non-lead paragraphs should have at least one inline citation, per D2 of the DYK supplementary rules.
North America1000 09:29, 8 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Its been a while since I edited anything so bare with me as I try to get back into how to format stuff.. I did try to put a hook.. "that James Walsh (convict) drew intricate artworks on his Australian cell wall that were discovered by accident almost a century later?" but they never showed once I saved the page. I think I need a little help with this. I will however endeaver to expand the text to meet criteria and find a citation. Thanks for your help. Ghostieguide (talk) 14:33, 8 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Template:Ping Page size is still only 1490 bytes of text, below the 1500-byte minimum. Also the biography paragraph needs citations for the part after his conviction. —David Eppstein (talk) 01:57, 25 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Expanded and added references.. Hope it helps.Ghostieguide (talk) 10:26, 28 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Now long enough but the phrasing of the hook fact in the article, "prison officer knocked off some whitewash while moving something", uses the exact words of the source, but is not marked as a quote. All article content needs to be in your own words, not copied, and not closely paraphrased. —David Eppstein (talk) 07:32, 29 April 2016 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg All remaining issues handled. Earwig found no other copyvio. Good to go. —David Eppstein (talk) 19:36, 30 April 2016 (UTC)