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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 19:08, 13 April 2017 (UTC)<br />
 
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* <s>... that in 1954 microbiologist '''[[Jane Gibson]]''' was the first to discover that the trace element [[selenium]] is essential for bacterial growth?</s>  <small>Source: [http://www.asm.org/ccLibraryFiles/FILENAME/000000004295/znw00908000426.pdf "Her work was mostly on trace elements, and she was the first to discover a specific role for selenium in bacterial growth]"</small>
 
* <s>... that in 1954 microbiologist '''[[Jane Gibson]]''' was the first to discover that the trace element [[selenium]] is essential for bacterial growth?</s>  <small>Source: [http://www.asm.org/ccLibraryFiles/FILENAME/000000004295/znw00908000426.pdf "Her work was mostly on trace elements, and she was the first to discover a specific role for selenium in bacterial growth]"</small>
 
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<small>Created/expanded by [[User:Nick Moyes|Nick Moyes]] ([[User talk:Nick Moyes|talk]]). Self-nominated at 14:04, 28 March 2017 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created/expanded by [[User:Nick Moyes|Nick Moyes]] ([[User talk:Nick Moyes|talk]]). Self-nominated at 14:04, 28 March 2017 (UTC).</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new, sufficiently long, QPQ done but close paraphrasing is found on a few sentences. ''She attended The Maynard School in Exeter'', ''E.coli are evolutionarily related to purple photosynthetic bacteria'', ''Jane Gibson served on the editorial board of The Journal of Bacteriology''. Rephrasing them would help render the article clean. The hook is interesting but may require a slight tweak for clarity. suggest the below:
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new, sufficiently long, QPQ done but close paraphrasing is found on a few sentences. ''She attended The Maynard School in Exeter'', ''E.coli are evolutionarily related to purple photosynthetic bacteria'', ''Jane Gibson served on the editorial board of The Journal of Bacteriology''. Rephrasing them would help render the article clean. The hook is interesting but may require a slight tweak for clarity. suggest the below:
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:*There's a citation needed tag on one paragraph. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:49, 11 April 2017 (UTC)
 
:*There's a citation needed tag on one paragraph. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:49, 11 April 2017 (UTC)
 
:: {{ping|Yoninah|Nick Moyes}} citation added, tag removed. [[User:Tachs|jojo@nthony]] ([[User talk:Tachs|talk]]) 06:31, 12 April 2017 (UTC)
 
:: {{ping|Yoninah|Nick Moyes}} citation added, tag removed. [[User:Tachs|jojo@nthony]] ([[User talk:Tachs|talk]]) 06:31, 12 April 2017 (UTC)
:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Thank you. Everything's in order now. ALT4 hook ref verified and cited inline. Rest of review per Tachs. ALT4 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 10:36, 12 April 2017 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 19:09, 13 April 2017

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 19:08, 13 April 2017 (UTC)

Jane Gibson

Created/expanded by Nick Moyes (talk). Self-nominated at 14:04, 28 March 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article is new, sufficiently long, QPQ done but close paraphrasing is found on a few sentences. She attended The Maynard School in Exeter, E.coli are evolutionarily related to purple photosynthetic bacteria, Jane Gibson served on the editorial board of The Journal of Bacteriology. Rephrasing them would help render the article clean. The hook is interesting but may require a slight tweak for clarity. suggest the below:

Please ping me once these issues are looked into. jojo@nthony (talk) 12:37, 30 March 2017 (UTC)

Template:Ping Tweaks now made to wording. Personally, I prefer the second of your two alternative suggestions, which I'd like to see go forward. Thanks for the feedback. Nick Moyes (talk) 18:27, 30 March 2017 (UTC)
Thanks Template:Re.

Symbol confirmed.svg Per concurrence of the nominator, suggest promotion of the below hook.

jojo@nthony (talk) 18:37, 30 March 2017 (UTC)

Symbol possible vote.svg I was going to promote this hook, but Gibson's discovery in 1954 was that the element selenium was essential for the growth of E. coli, but the phrase "for bacterial growth" in the hook implies that this is true for all bacteria, so the hook needs to be made more specific. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:30, 8 April 2017 (UTC)
Template:Ping The cited source (page 11) says bacterial growth but her scientific paper as well as the article refer to coliform bacteria (paper) hence suggest a tweak as below:
  • There's a citation needed tag on one paragraph. Yoninah (talk) 22:49, 11 April 2017 (UTC)
Template:Ping citation added, tag removed. jojo@nthony (talk) 06:31, 12 April 2017 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Thank you. Everything's in order now. ALT4 hook ref verified and cited inline. Rest of review per Tachs. ALT4 good to go. Yoninah (talk) 10:36, 12 April 2017 (UTC)