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::::::*{{Re|Yoninah}} Added a selected list of works. Hope now the DYK ready to go. [[User:Amkgp| ~ Amkgp]] [[User talk:Amkgp|<big>💬</big>]] 14:23, 27 August 2020 (UTC) | ::::::*{{Re|Yoninah}} Added a selected list of works. Hope now the DYK ready to go. [[User:Amkgp| ~ Amkgp]] [[User talk:Amkgp|<big>💬</big>]] 14:23, 27 August 2020 (UTC) | ||
:::::::*{{ping|Amkgp}} Do you have a source for these lists? (See [[WP:DYKSG#D2|Rule D2]]). [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 15:28, 27 August 2020 (UTC) | :::::::*{{ping|Amkgp}} Do you have a source for these lists? (See [[WP:DYKSG#D2|Rule D2]]). [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 15:28, 27 August 2020 (UTC) | ||
| + | ::::::::*{{Re|Yoninah}} <code><nowiki>{{sfn|Gómez Moriana|2010|p=133-137}}</nowiki></code> common ref for all added at the start of section 'Selected list of works'. [[User:Amkgp| ~ Amkgp]] [[User talk:Amkgp|<big>💬</big>]] 17:00, 27 August 2020 (UTC) | ||
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Joaquín Bilbao
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- ALT1: ... that the statue of Ferdinand III of Castile located in the Plaza Nueva, Seville (pictured) was sculpted by Joaquín Bilbao? Source: Tilburg, Kees van (6 April 2016). "Equestrian statue of Fernando lll in Sevilla Spain". Equestrian statues. Retrieved 24 July 2020.
Created by Amkgp (talk). Self-nominated at 19:47, 25 July 2020 (UTC).
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Hi, I keep coming by to promote this, because the image is kind of neat even though it's shadowy. But the approved hook, which the approving editor himself wrote, is really not hooky. Putting the subject's name at the very end of the hook also shifts the focus away from him; readers are more likely to click on the sculpture link instead. I would promote the first hook, except there is no verification in the source that this is what he is "best known" for. (I removed the source from the lead.)- However, if this is what he's best known for, I think you should add a short section about it. Other pages on sculptors also list their works and date of completion. The article hardly has any personal information about him, and I've added two tags. An infobox would also be nice.
- Here is another hook idea:
- ALT3: ... that Joaquín Bilbao first studied drawing, watercolour, and law before launching a career as a sculptor (work pictured)? Yoninah (talk) 21:42, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
- ALT4: ... that Joaquín Bilbao first studied drawing, watercolour, and law before launching a career as a sculptor with works like the statue of Ferdinand III of Castile (pictured) located at Plaza Nueva?
- Template:Re I have proposed ALT4. It is within 200 word hook length limit and suggested improvements have been made at the article also. ~ Amkgp 💬 04:17, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Ping thank you. Are you going to say anything about his works in the article? Right now it's all about his professional affiliations. Yoninah (talk) 11:34, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Re Added a selected list of works. Hope now the DYK ready to go. ~ Amkgp 💬 14:23, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Ping Do you have a source for these lists? (See Rule D2). Yoninah (talk) 15:28, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
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{{sfn|Gómez Moriana|2010|p=133-137}}common ref for all added at the start of section 'Selected list of works'. ~ Amkgp 💬 17:00, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
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