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* <s>... that '''[[Joaquín Bilbao]]''' is best known for his work of the equestrian statue of [[Ferdinand III of Castile]] that is located in the [[Plaza Nueva, Seville]]?</s> <small>Source: Tilburg, Kees van (6 April 2016). "[https://equestrianstatue.org/fernando-lll/ Equestrian statue of Fernando lll in Sevilla Spain]". Equestrian statues. Retrieved 24 July 2020.</small></div><includeonly>|}}</includeonly>
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* <s>... that '''[[Joaquín Bilbao]]''' is best known for his work of the equestrian statue of [[Ferdinand III of Castile]] that is located in the [[Plaza Nueva, Seville]]?</s> <small>Source: Tilburg, Kees van (6 April 2016). "[https://equestrianstatue.org/fernando-lll/ Equestrian statue of Fernando lll in Sevilla Spain]". Equestrian statues. Retrieved 24 July 2020.</small>
 
:*'''ALT0a''':<s>  ... that '''[[Joaquín Bilbao]]''' is recognized for his work of the equestrian statue of [[Ferdinand III of Castile]] that is located in the [[Plaza Nueva, Seville]]?</s>
 
:*'''ALT0a''':<s>  ... that '''[[Joaquín Bilbao]]''' is recognized for his work of the equestrian statue of [[Ferdinand III of Castile]] that is located in the [[Plaza Nueva, Seville]]?</s>
 
:*'''ALT1''': <s>...  that the statue of [[Ferdinand III of Castile]] located in the [[Plaza Nueva, Seville]] ''(pictured)'' was sculpted by '''[[Joaquín Bilbao]]'''?</s><small> Source: Tilburg, Kees van (6 April 2016). "[https://equestrianstatue.org/fernando-lll/ Equestrian statue of Fernando lll in Sevilla Spain]". Equestrian statues. Retrieved 24 July 2020.</small>
 
:*'''ALT1''': <s>...  that the statue of [[Ferdinand III of Castile]] located in the [[Plaza Nueva, Seville]] ''(pictured)'' was sculpted by '''[[Joaquín Bilbao]]'''?</s><small> Source: Tilburg, Kees van (6 April 2016). "[https://equestrianstatue.org/fernando-lll/ Equestrian statue of Fernando lll in Sevilla Spain]". Equestrian statues. Retrieved 24 July 2020.</small>
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:::::::::*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] Thank you! The article looks much better now. I have struck the unused hooks and also trimmed the image caption, because it just repeated the information in the hook. Since I proposed the hook direction, we need another editor to sign off on ALT4. Pinging original reviewer {{u|Berchanhimez}}. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 17:41, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
 
:::::::::*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] Thank you! The article looks much better now. I have struck the unused hooks and also trimmed the image caption, because it just repeated the information in the hook. Since I proposed the hook direction, we need another editor to sign off on ALT4. Pinging original reviewer {{u|Berchanhimez}}. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 17:41, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
 
::::::::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] - [[User:Yoninah]], assuming you pinged me because I'm allowed to "re-review" the new hook, then I'm happy with it too. If not, then please feel free to remove the approved tick and just leave this as my comment. Thanks for figuring out how to make the hook more interesting where I couldn't. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez ([[User:Berchanhimez|User]]/[[User talk:Berchanhimez|say hi!]]) 20:26, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
 
::::::::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] - [[User:Yoninah]], assuming you pinged me because I'm allowed to "re-review" the new hook, then I'm happy with it too. If not, then please feel free to remove the approved tick and just leave this as my comment. Thanks for figuring out how to make the hook more interesting where I couldn't. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez ([[User:Berchanhimez|User]]/[[User talk:Berchanhimez|say hi!]]) 20:26, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
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Revision as of 18:23, 31 August 2020

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 18:17, 31 August 2020 (UTC)

Joaquín Bilbao

Statue of Ferdinand III of Castile in Seville
Statue of Ferdinand III of Castile in Seville

Created by Amkgp (talk). Self-nominated at 19:47, 25 July 2020 (UTC).

  • Lua error: expandTemplate: template "y" does not exist.
  • Symbol question.svg Hi, I keep coming by to promote this, because the image is kind of neat even though it's shadowy. But the approved hook, which the approving editor himself wrote, is really not hooky. Putting the subject's name at the very end of the hook also shifts the focus away from him; readers are more likely to click on the sculpture link instead. I would promote the first hook, except there is no verification in the source that this is what he is "best known" for. (I removed the source from the lead.)
  • However, if this is what he's best known for, I think you should add a short section about it. Other pages on sculptors also list their works and date of completion. The article hardly has any personal information about him, and I've added two tags. An infobox would also be nice.
  • Here is another hook idea:
  • ALT3: ... that Joaquín Bilbao first studied drawing, watercolour, and law before launching a career as a sculptor (work pictured)? Yoninah (talk) 21:42, 26 August 2020 (UTC)
Template:Re I have proposed ALT4. It is within 200 word hook length limit and suggested improvements have been made at the article also. ~ Amkgp 💬 04:17, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping thank you. Are you going to say anything about his works in the article? Right now it's all about his professional affiliations. Yoninah (talk) 11:34, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Re {{sfn|Gómez Moriana|2010|p=133-137}} common ref for all added at the start of section 'Selected list of works'. ~ Amkgp 💬 17:00, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Thank you! The article looks much better now. I have struck the unused hooks and also trimmed the image caption, because it just repeated the information in the hook. Since I proposed the hook direction, we need another editor to sign off on ALT4. Pinging original reviewer Template:U. Yoninah (talk) 17:41, 27 August 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg - User:Yoninah, assuming you pinged me because I'm allowed to "re-review" the new hook, then I'm happy with it too. If not, then please feel free to remove the approved tick and just leave this as my comment. Thanks for figuring out how to make the hook more interesting where I couldn't. -bɜ:ʳkənhɪmez (User/say hi!) 20:26, 27 August 2020 (UTC)