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::*Thank you {{reply|Dahn}} for reviewing. Let me go over and ping you back. [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) 14:25, 4 August 2018 (UTC) | ::*Thank you {{reply|Dahn}} for reviewing. Let me go over and ping you back. [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) 14:25, 4 August 2018 (UTC) | ||
:::*{{Ping|Dahn}}. Please check again when convenient. [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) 21:26, 4 August 2018 (UTC) | :::*{{Ping|Dahn}}. Please check again when convenient. [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) 21:26, 4 August 2018 (UTC) | ||
+ | ::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] {{ping|Whispyhistory}} Many thanks for incorporating my suggestions and for your quick response. The article is now good to go. [[User:Dahn|Dahn]] ([[User talk:Dahn|talk]]) 05:58, 5 August 2018 (UTC) | ||
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John Zamet
- ... that periodontist John Zamet was awarded a PhD after his death for his research on German and Austrian refugee dentists?
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Created by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy (talk) at 18:54, 2 August 2018 (UTC).
New, long, neutrally voiced. Hook is verified and interesting. QPQ done. Thaaaat said, the article still has some issues. First of all, the sections are annoyingly small -- all of the second-level titles, such as "University of Philadelphia", can be removed and nothing would be lost for the reader; the Early life and subsequent can be merged into a Biography section. Also, what do the brackets add in "Describing his regret of lost records or lack of archival material due to (Vergangenheitsbewältigung)"? It looks misplaced and I can't tell what word is missing. The "cottage industry" quote is not followed by a citation -- this would be okay in my book, as long as the phrase right after would have the citation; but it has three -- which one of them is the quote from? Dahn (talk) 14:09, 4 August 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you Template:Reply for reviewing. Let me go over and ping you back. Whispyhistory (talk) 14:25, 4 August 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Ping. Please check again when convenient. Whispyhistory (talk) 21:26, 4 August 2018 (UTC)
Template:Ping Many thanks for incorporating my suggestions and for your quick response. The article is now good to go. Dahn (talk) 05:58, 5 August 2018 (UTC)