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* ... that periodontist '''[[John Zamet]]''' was awarded a PhD after his death for his research on German and Austrian refugee dentists? | * ... that periodontist '''[[John Zamet]]''' was awarded a PhD after his death for his research on German and Austrian refugee dentists? | ||
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Exocoetus volitans|Exocoetus volitans]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Exocoetus volitans|Exocoetus volitans]] | ||
<small>Created by [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) and [[User:Philafrenzy|Philafrenzy]] ([[User talk:Philafrenzy|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Philafrenzy|Philafrenzy]] ([[User talk:Philafrenzy|talk]]) at 18:54, 2 August 2018 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) and [[User:Philafrenzy|Philafrenzy]] ([[User talk:Philafrenzy|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Philafrenzy|Philafrenzy]] ([[User talk:Philafrenzy|talk]]) at 18:54, 2 August 2018 (UTC).</small> | ||
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New, long, neutrally voiced. Hook is verified and interesting. QPQ done. Thaaaat said, the article still has some issues. First of all, the sections are annoyingly small -- all of the second-level titles, such as "University of Philadelphia", can be removed and nothing would be lost for the reader; the Early life and subsequent can be merged into a Biography section. Also, what do the brackets add in "Describing his regret of lost records or lack of archival material due to (Vergangenheitsbewältigung)"? It looks misplaced and I can't tell what word is missing. The "cottage industry" quote is not followed by a citation -- this would be okay in my book, as long as the phrase right after would have the citation; but it has ''three'' -- which one of them is the quote from? [[User:Dahn|Dahn]] ([[User talk:Dahn|talk]]) 14:09, 4 August 2018 (UTC) | :*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New, long, neutrally voiced. Hook is verified and interesting. QPQ done. Thaaaat said, the article still has some issues. First of all, the sections are annoyingly small -- all of the second-level titles, such as "University of Philadelphia", can be removed and nothing would be lost for the reader; the Early life and subsequent can be merged into a Biography section. Also, what do the brackets add in "Describing his regret of lost records or lack of archival material due to (Vergangenheitsbewältigung)"? It looks misplaced and I can't tell what word is missing. The "cottage industry" quote is not followed by a citation -- this would be okay in my book, as long as the phrase right after would have the citation; but it has ''three'' -- which one of them is the quote from? [[User:Dahn|Dahn]] ([[User talk:Dahn|talk]]) 14:09, 4 August 2018 (UTC) | ||
::*Thank you {{reply|Dahn}} for reviewing. Let me go over and ping you back. [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) 14:25, 4 August 2018 (UTC) | ::*Thank you {{reply|Dahn}} for reviewing. Let me go over and ping you back. [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) 14:25, 4 August 2018 (UTC) | ||
:::*{{Ping|Dahn}}. Please check again when convenient. [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) 21:26, 4 August 2018 (UTC) | :::*{{Ping|Dahn}}. Please check again when convenient. [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) 21:26, 4 August 2018 (UTC) | ||
− | ::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] {{ping|Whispyhistory}} Many thanks for incorporating my suggestions and for your quick response. The article is now good to go. [[User:Dahn|Dahn]] ([[User talk:Dahn|talk]]) 05:58, 5 August 2018 (UTC) | + | ::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] {{ping|Whispyhistory}} Many thanks for incorporating my suggestions and for your quick response. The article is now good to go. [[User:Dahn|Dahn]] ([[User talk:Dahn|talk]]) 05:58, 5 August 2018 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> |
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Latest revision as of 05:34, 11 August 2018
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:34, 11 August 2018 (UTC)
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John Zamet
- ... that periodontist John Zamet was awarded a PhD after his death for his research on German and Austrian refugee dentists?
- Reviewed: Exocoetus volitans
Created by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy (talk) at 18:54, 2 August 2018 (UTC).
New, long, neutrally voiced. Hook is verified and interesting. QPQ done. Thaaaat said, the article still has some issues. First of all, the sections are annoyingly small -- all of the second-level titles, such as "University of Philadelphia", can be removed and nothing would be lost for the reader; the Early life and subsequent can be merged into a Biography section. Also, what do the brackets add in "Describing his regret of lost records or lack of archival material due to (Vergangenheitsbewältigung)"? It looks misplaced and I can't tell what word is missing. The "cottage industry" quote is not followed by a citation -- this would be okay in my book, as long as the phrase right after would have the citation; but it has three -- which one of them is the quote from? Dahn (talk) 14:09, 4 August 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you Template:Reply for reviewing. Let me go over and ping you back. Whispyhistory (talk) 14:25, 4 August 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Ping. Please check again when convenient. Whispyhistory (talk) 21:26, 4 August 2018 (UTC)
Template:Ping Many thanks for incorporating my suggestions and for your quick response. The article is now good to go. Dahn (talk) 05:58, 5 August 2018 (UTC)