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:*The theodolite design is more important in the scheme of things, although perhaps it was ready to be invented, but the word "[[theodolite]]" would turn off many readers. The Academy is also interesting.  I prefer the sense of the first hook with simplified wording.  How about:
 
:*The theodolite design is more important in the scheme of things, although perhaps it was ready to be invented, but the word "[[theodolite]]" would turn off many readers. The Academy is also interesting.  I prefer the sense of the first hook with simplified wording.  How about:
::'''ALT2''' ... that [[Pope Benedict XIV]] arranged for '''[[Jonathan Sisson]]'''{{'s}} instruments to be installed in the [[Academy of Sciences of the Institute of Bologna|Bologna Academy]]?
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::'''ALT2''' ... that [[Pope Benedict XIV]] arranged for '''[[Jonathan Sisson]]'''{{`s}} instruments to be installed in the [[Academy of Sciences of the Institute of Bologna|Bologna Academy]]?
 
::[[User:Aymatth2|Aymatth2]] ([[User talk:Aymatth2|talk]]) 02:31, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
 
::[[User:Aymatth2|Aymatth2]] ([[User talk:Aymatth2|talk]]) 02:31, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
 
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Jonathan Sisson

Created by Aymatth2 (talk). Nominated by Rcej (talk) at 12:06, 19 January 2013 (UTC)

"to be equipped in the Specola observatory of the Academy of Sciences of Bologna Institute?" is hardly correct English. Johnbod (talk) 17:50, 24 January 2013 (UTC)
  • The theodolite design is more important in the scheme of things, although perhaps it was ready to be invented, but the word "theodolite" would turn off many readers. The Academy is also interesting. I prefer the sense of the first hook with simplified wording. How about:
ALT2 ... that Pope Benedict XIV arranged for Jonathan SissonTemplate:`s instruments to be installed in the Bologna Academy?
Aymatth2 (talk) 02:31, 25 January 2013 (UTC)