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{{*mp}}... that in 1741, [[Pope Benedict XIV]] arranged for [[astronomy|astronomical]] instruments bought from maker '''[[Jonathan Sisson]]''' to be equipped in the ''Specola'' observatory of the [[Academy of Sciences of Bologna Institute]]?
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::'''ALT2''' ... that [[Pope Benedict XIV]] arranged for '''[[Jonathan Sisson]]'''{{`s}} instruments to be installed in the [[Academy of Sciences of the Institute of Bologna|Bologna Academy]]?
 
::'''ALT2''' ... that [[Pope Benedict XIV]] arranged for '''[[Jonathan Sisson]]'''{{`s}} instruments to be installed in the [[Academy of Sciences of the Institute of Bologna|Bologna Academy]]?
 
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Revision as of 19:06, 4 February 2013

Jonathan Sisson

Created by Aymatth2 (talk). Nominated by Rcej (talk) at 12:06, 19 January 2013 (UTC)

"to be equipped in the Specola observatory of the Academy of Sciences of Bologna Institute?" is hardly correct English. Johnbod (talk) 17:50, 24 January 2013 (UTC)
  • The theodolite design is more important in the scheme of things, although perhaps it was ready to be invented, but the word "theodolite" would turn off many readers. The Academy is also interesting. I prefer the sense of the first hook with simplified wording. How about:
ALT2 ... that Pope Benedict XIV arranged for Jonathan SissonTemplate:`s instruments to be installed in the Bologna Academy?
Aymatth2 (talk) 02:31, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svgSymbol redirect vote4.png ALT hooks need reviewing; original hook struck due to grammatical issues. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:06, 4 February 2013 (UTC)