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<s>{{*mp}}... that in 1741, [[Pope Benedict XIV]] arranged for [[astronomy|astronomical]] instruments bought from maker '''[[Jonathan Sisson]]''' to be equipped in the ''Specola'' observatory of the [[Academy of Sciences of Bologna Institute]]?</s>
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*<s>... that in 1741, [[Pope Benedict XIV]] arranged for [[astronomy|astronomical]] instruments bought from maker '''[[Jonathan Sisson]]''' to be equipped in the ''Specola'' observatory of the [[Academy of Sciences of Bologna Institute]]?</s>
 
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<small>Created  by [[User:Aymatth2|Aymatth2]] ([[User talk:Aymatth2|talk]]).  Nominated by [[User:Rcej|Rcej]] ([[User talk:Rcej|talk]]) at 12:06, 19 January 2013 (UTC)</small>
 
<small>Created  by [[User:Aymatth2|Aymatth2]] ([[User talk:Aymatth2|talk]]).  Nominated by [[User:Rcej|Rcej]] ([[User talk:Rcej|talk]]) at 12:06, 19 January 2013 (UTC)</small>

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Round symbols for illustrating comments about the DYK nomination The following is an archived discussion of Jonathan Sisson's DYK nomination. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page; such as this archived nomination"s (talk) page, the nominated article's (talk) page, or the Did you knowDYK comment symbol (talk) page. Unless there is consensus to re-open the archived discussion here. No further edits should be made to this page. See the talk page guidelines for (more) information.

The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 20:00, 13 February 2013 (UTC).

Jonathan Sisson

Created by Aymatth2 (talk). Nominated by Rcej (talk) at 12:06, 19 January 2013 (UTC)

"to be equipped in the Specola observatory of the Academy of Sciences of Bologna Institute?" is hardly correct English. Johnbod (talk) 17:50, 24 January 2013 (UTC)
  • The theodolite design is more important in the scheme of things, although perhaps it was ready to be invented, but the word "theodolite" would turn off many readers. The Academy is also interesting. I prefer the sense of the first hook with simplified wording. How about:
ALT2 ... that Pope Benedict XIV arranged for Jonathan SissonTemplate:`s instruments to be installed in the Bologna Academy?
Aymatth2 (talk) 02:31, 25 January 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svgSymbol redirect vote4.png ALT hooks need reviewing; original hook struck due to grammatical issues. BlueMoonset (talk) 19:06, 4 February 2013 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Good to go with either of the ALT hooks, but preference would be for ALT2 due to length. Everything else looks good with this article. Moswento talky 11:44, 13 February 2013 (UTC)