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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]])&nbsp;12:42, 26 July 2020 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... that '''''[[Kajko i Kokosz (video game)|Kajko i Kokosz]]''''' of 1994 was the first of several Polish video games based on [[Kajko and Kokosz|the comic book series of the same name]]?  <small>Source: https://entuzjastagier.pl/2018/08/kajko-i-kokosz.html</small>
 
* ... that '''''[[Kajko i Kokosz (video game)|Kajko i Kokosz]]''''' of 1994 was the first of several Polish video games based on [[Kajko and Kokosz|the comic book series of the same name]]?  <small>Source: https://entuzjastagier.pl/2018/08/kajko-i-kokosz.html</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that the 1994 Polish video game  '''''[[Kajko i Kokosz (video game)|Kajko i Kokosz]]''''' was not playtested, and the initial release had to be recalled and replaced?  <small>Source: https://books.google.com/books?id=LWVoCgAAQBAJ&pg=PT197</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that the 1994 Polish video game  '''''[[Kajko i Kokosz (video game)|Kajko i Kokosz]]''''' was not playtested, and the initial release had to be recalled and replaced?  <small>Source: https://books.google.com/books?id=LWVoCgAAQBAJ&pg=PT197</small>
 
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<small>Created by [[User:Piotrus|Piotrus]] ([[User talk:Piotrus|talk]]). Self-nominated at 12:22, 28 June 2020 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Piotrus|Piotrus]] ([[User talk:Piotrus|talk]]). Self-nominated at 12:22, 28 June 2020 (UTC).</small>
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new enough and long enough, and the sourcing is sufficient for DYK purposes. Only ALT1 is approved as it may have a broader and more global appeal compared to ALT0; assuming good faith for the Polish-language sources that's used as references. QPQ has been done. Before the nomination can be approved however, the article needs to be copyedited for grammar and other issues. For example, "that has released games..." should be "that had released games..." since it's talking about a past event. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 09:32, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new enough and long enough, and the sourcing is sufficient for DYK purposes. Only ALT1 is approved as it may have a broader and more global appeal compared to ALT0; assuming good faith for the Polish-language sources that's used as references. QPQ has been done. Before the nomination can be approved however, the article needs to be copyedited for grammar and other issues. For example, "that has released games..." should be "that had released games..." since it's talking about a past event. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 09:32, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
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** '''ALT2b''':... that the 1994 '''''[[Kajko i Kokosz (video game)|Kajko i Kokosz]]''''', the first video game based on the Polish [[Kajko and Kokosz|comic book series]] of the same name, was not playtested, and the initial release had to be recalled and replaced?
 
** '''ALT2b''':... that the 1994 '''''[[Kajko i Kokosz (video game)|Kajko i Kokosz]]''''', the first video game based on the Polish [[Kajko and Kokosz|comic book series]] of the same name, was not playtested, and the initial release had to be recalled and replaced?
 
:::I'd word it as something like '''ALT2c''': ... that the 1994 video game '''''[[Kajko i Kokosz (video game)|Kajko i Kokosz]]''''', the first based on the Polish [[Kajko and Kokosz|comic book series]] of the same name, was not playtested, and the initial release had to be recalled and replaced?, but otherwise I think we should be good to go with that. [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] ALT2c (which is just a slight rewording of ALT2b) is approved. If there's a desire to remove certain words that can be done in prep. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 03:19, 25 July 2020 (UTC)  
 
:::I'd word it as something like '''ALT2c''': ... that the 1994 video game '''''[[Kajko i Kokosz (video game)|Kajko i Kokosz]]''''', the first based on the Polish [[Kajko and Kokosz|comic book series]] of the same name, was not playtested, and the initial release had to be recalled and replaced?, but otherwise I think we should be good to go with that. [[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] ALT2c (which is just a slight rewording of ALT2b) is approved. If there's a desire to remove certain words that can be done in prep. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 03:19, 25 July 2020 (UTC)  
::::Thank you, I am fine with Alt2c as well. --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]&#124;[[User talk:Piotrus|<span style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</span>]]</sub> 04:16, 25 July 2020 (UTC)
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::::Thank you, I am fine with Alt2c as well. --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]&#124;[[User talk:Piotrus|<span style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</span>]]</sub> 04:16, 25 July 2020 (UTC)</div><includeonly>|}}</includeonly><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
 
 
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Latest revision as of 12:42, 26 July 2020

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 12:42, 26 July 2020 (UTC)

Kajko i Kokosz (video game)‎

Created by Piotrus (talk). Self-nominated at 12:22, 28 June 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article is new enough and long enough, and the sourcing is sufficient for DYK purposes. Only ALT1 is approved as it may have a broader and more global appeal compared to ALT0; assuming good faith for the Polish-language sources that's used as references. QPQ has been done. Before the nomination can be approved however, the article needs to be copyedited for grammar and other issues. For example, "that has released games..." should be "that had released games..." since it's talking about a past event. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 09:32, 21 July 2020 (UTC)
Ping User:Piotrus:
I've copyedited the article. Some points need clarification. Example: in the final sentence, beginning, "Despite a number of other Polish games based on the[clarification needed] comics," does "the comics" in fact refer to the original "Kajko and Kokosz" comics – or is the word "the" an error?
Nihil novi (talk) 07:09, 22 July 2020 (UTC)
Another possibility I could see here could be to combine ALT0 and ALT1 by mentioning that the game was based on a comic book series (if not necessarily saying that it was the first of several; perhaps just add wording like "based on the comic book series of the same name" to ALT1). Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 14:17, 23 July 2020 (UTC)
Template:Rto How about the ALT2 below? If this is a bit too long, suggest removing 'recalled' or 'replaced', and/or the 'released in 1994'. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 06:16, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
As the subject is the video game and not the comic book, along with the fact that I'm not sure if the series is well-known outside of Poland, I'd suggest just going with the "based on the comic book series of the same name" wording as opposed to the one that goes "the first Polish video game based on..." Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 06:31, 24 July 2020 (UTC)
Template:Rto Ok, so ALT2b below: --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 01:52, 25 July 2020 (UTC)
    • ALT2b:... that the 1994 Kajko i Kokosz, the first video game based on the Polish comic book series of the same name, was not playtested, and the initial release had to be recalled and replaced?
I'd word it as something like ALT2c: ... that the 1994 video game Kajko i Kokosz, the first based on the Polish comic book series of the same name, was not playtested, and the initial release had to be recalled and replaced?, but otherwise I think we should be good to go with that. Symbol voting keep.svg ALT2c (which is just a slight rewording of ALT2b) is approved. If there's a desire to remove certain words that can be done in prep. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 03:19, 25 July 2020 (UTC)
Thank you, I am fine with Alt2c as well. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:16, 25 July 2020 (UTC)