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:::::::*{{ping|CreativeNorth}} well, it's almost identical to another nomination, [[Template:Did you know nominations/Galle Gladiators in 2020]]. Try to be "hooky" rather than spell everything out. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:10, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
 
:::::::*{{ping|CreativeNorth}} well, it's almost identical to another nomination, [[Template:Did you know nominations/Galle Gladiators in 2020]]. Try to be "hooky" rather than spell everything out. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:10, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
 
::::::::*{{reply to|Yoninah}} Sorry if I'm being annoying. But I've tried to make ALT3 less wordy and also added an ALT4. Thanks. [[User:CreativeNorth|CreativeNorth]] ([[User talk:CreativeNorth|talk]]) 17:17, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 
::::::::*{{reply to|Yoninah}} Sorry if I'm being annoying. But I've tried to make ALT3 less wordy and also added an ALT4. Thanks. [[User:CreativeNorth|CreativeNorth]] ([[User talk:CreativeNorth|talk]]) 17:17, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 
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:::::::::*{{ping|CreativeNorth}} as I said above, these new hooks also make it seem like you're clicking on the team article, not the article about the 2020 season. I took a look at the article and gave it a complete copyedit. Please check to see that I understood what you were talking about (I know nothing about cricket) and then I will suggest an alt. Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 18:05, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
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Kandy Tuskers in 2020

Created by Fade258 (talk). Nominated by CreativeNorth (talk) at 12:45, 12 December 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The source reflects the hook, and the article appears appropriate, but the hook doesn't make sense to an average reader. Suggest something like: that the Sri Lankan Lanka Premier League cricket team the Kandy Tuskers is owned by Bollywood actor Sohail Khan? Sadads (talk) 13:41, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg That looks right, lets go with ALT2, Sadads (talk) 21:09, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Sorry, but none of the hooks are accurate because they make you think you're clicking on Kandy Tuskers, not an article about their 2020 season. Please write a different hook that clues the reader to the topic. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 19:57, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping as I said above, these new hooks also make it seem like you're clicking on the team article, not the article about the 2020 season. I took a look at the article and gave it a complete copyedit. Please check to see that I understood what you were talking about (I know nothing about cricket) and then I will suggest an alt. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 18:05, 20 December 2020 (UTC)