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:::::::::*{{ping|CreativeNorth}} as I said above, these new hooks also make it seem like you're clicking on the team article, not the article about the 2020 season. I took a look at the article and gave it a complete copyedit. Please check to see that I understood what you were talking about (I know nothing about cricket) and then I will suggest an alt. Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 18:05, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 
:::::::::*{{ping|CreativeNorth}} as I said above, these new hooks also make it seem like you're clicking on the team article, not the article about the 2020 season. I took a look at the article and gave it a complete copyedit. Please check to see that I understood what you were talking about (I know nothing about cricket) and then I will suggest an alt. Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 18:05, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 
::::::::::*{{reply to|Yoninah}} Thanks for the copyedit, in your opinion what would you suggest for a hook then. Thanks [[User:CreativeNorth|CreativeNorth]] ([[User talk:CreativeNorth|talk]]) 18:30, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 
::::::::::*{{reply to|Yoninah}} Thanks for the copyedit, in your opinion what would you suggest for a hook then. Thanks [[User:CreativeNorth|CreativeNorth]] ([[User talk:CreativeNorth|talk]]) 18:30, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
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:::::::::::*Really? I got everything right? I think I mixed up wickets and runs in several places.
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:::::::::::*'''ALT5''': ... that though their captain scored the most runs of any [[Batting (cricket)|batsman]] in the [[Lanka Premier League]] in 2020, the '''[[Kandy Tuskers in 2020|Kandy Tuskers finished in last place]]'''? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 18:40, 20 December 2020 (UTC)
 
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Latest revision as of 18:40, 20 December 2020

Kandy Tuskers in 2020

Created by Fade258 (talk). Nominated by CreativeNorth (talk) at 12:45, 12 December 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg The source reflects the hook, and the article appears appropriate, but the hook doesn't make sense to an average reader. Suggest something like: that the Sri Lankan Lanka Premier League cricket team the Kandy Tuskers is owned by Bollywood actor Sohail Khan? Sadads (talk) 13:41, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg That looks right, lets go with ALT2, Sadads (talk) 21:09, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Sorry, but none of the hooks are accurate because they make you think you're clicking on Kandy Tuskers, not an article about their 2020 season. Please write a different hook that clues the reader to the topic. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 19:57, 19 December 2020 (UTC)
  • Template:Ping as I said above, these new hooks also make it seem like you're clicking on the team article, not the article about the 2020 season. I took a look at the article and gave it a complete copyedit. Please check to see that I understood what you were talking about (I know nothing about cricket) and then I will suggest an alt. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 18:05, 20 December 2020 (UTC)