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* ... that '''[[Kenichi Marumo]]''' scored a run for the [[Orix Buffaloes]] baseball team despite never holding a bat? | * ... that '''[[Kenichi Marumo]]''' scored a run for the [[Orix Buffaloes]] baseball team despite never holding a bat? | ||
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:* ''Comment'': This is mainly a translation from the corresponding Japanese article, but I have also expanded it a bit and added extra sources. As for the hook, the subject spent four years in the second-team "farm league", but only ever appeared in one first-team match. In that game he was used as a pinch runner and scored a run. He was then replaced with someone else before having a chance to field or bat himself. The technical term would be "despite never having a plate appearance", but I think "never holding a bat" sounds more "hooky". If it is too vague or misleading, I would love to hear other suggestions. | :* ''Comment'': This is mainly a translation from the corresponding Japanese article, but I have also expanded it a bit and added extra sources. As for the hook, the subject spent four years in the second-team "farm league", but only ever appeared in one first-team match. In that game he was used as a pinch runner and scored a run. He was then replaced with someone else before having a chance to field or bat himself. The technical term would be "despite never having a plate appearance", but I think "never holding a bat" sounds more "hooky". If it is too vague or misleading, I would love to hear other suggestions. | ||
<small>Created by [[User:Athomeinkobe|Athomeinkobe]] ([[User talk:Athomeinkobe|talk]]). Self-nominated at 06:42, 22 October 2015 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Athomeinkobe|Athomeinkobe]] ([[User talk:Athomeinkobe|talk]]). Self-nominated at 06:42, 22 October 2015 (UTC).</small> | ||
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, meets core content policies. Hook cited to RS, but I'm concerned that the hook makes it sound like he literally never held a baseball bat during his entire career. Perhaps '''ALT1: ''' ... that '''[[Kenichi Marumo]]''' once scored a run for the [[Orix Buffaloes]] baseball team despite not appearing at the plate? --'''[[User:Jakec|Jakob]] ([[user talk:Jakec|talk]]) ''' <small><small>aka Jakec</small></small> 19:15, 22 October 2015 (UTC) | :*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, meets core content policies. Hook cited to RS, but I'm concerned that the hook makes it sound like he literally never held a baseball bat during his entire career. Perhaps '''ALT1: ''' ... that '''[[Kenichi Marumo]]''' once scored a run for the [[Orix Buffaloes]] baseball team despite not appearing at the plate? --'''[[User:Jakec|Jakob]] ([[user talk:Jakec|talk]]) ''' <small><small>aka Jakec</small></small> 19:15, 22 October 2015 (UTC) | ||
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::[[User:Athomeinkobe|AtHomeIn神戸]] ([[User talk:Athomeinkobe|talk]]) 00:27, 23 October 2015 (UTC) | ::[[User:Athomeinkobe|AtHomeIn神戸]] ([[User talk:Athomeinkobe|talk]]) 00:27, 23 October 2015 (UTC) | ||
:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Alternative hooks are interesting. Article has not been changed since review of Jakec so rest of review stays. Good to go. --[[User:Human3015|'''<span style="color:#0000FF;">Human</span><span style="color:#808000 ;">3015</span>''']][[User talk:Human3015|<span style="color:#FF1493"><b><small><sup>TALK</sup></small></b></span>]] 01:50, 9 November 2015 (UTC) | :* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Alternative hooks are interesting. Article has not been changed since review of Jakec so rest of review stays. Good to go. --[[User:Human3015|'''<span style="color:#0000FF;">Human</span><span style="color:#808000 ;">3015</span>''']][[User talk:Human3015|<span style="color:#FF1493"><b><small><sup>TALK</sup></small></b></span>]] 01:50, 9 November 2015 (UTC) | ||
− | ::*Sorry I didn't respond earlier. I've been pretty busy with a personal project lately and haven't gotten around to editing as much as I usually do. --'''[[User:Jakec|Jakob]] ([[user talk:Jakec|talk]]) ''' <small><small>aka Jakec</small></small> 03:47, 9 November 2015 (UTC) | + | ::*Sorry I didn't respond earlier. I've been pretty busy with a personal project lately and haven't gotten around to editing as much as I usually do. --'''[[User:Jakec|Jakob]] ([[user talk:Jakec|talk]]) ''' <small><small>aka Jakec</small></small> 03:47, 9 November 2015 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.--> |
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Latest revision as of 16:06, 9 November 2015
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 16:06, 9 November 2015 (UTC)
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Kenichi Marumo
- ... that Kenichi Marumo scored a run for the Orix Buffaloes baseball team despite never holding a bat?
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Henry Fox (cricketer)
- Comment: This is mainly a translation from the corresponding Japanese article, but I have also expanded it a bit and added extra sources. As for the hook, the subject spent four years in the second-team "farm league", but only ever appeared in one first-team match. In that game he was used as a pinch runner and scored a run. He was then replaced with someone else before having a chance to field or bat himself. The technical term would be "despite never having a plate appearance", but I think "never holding a bat" sounds more "hooky". If it is too vague or misleading, I would love to hear other suggestions.
Created by Athomeinkobe (talk). Self-nominated at 06:42, 22 October 2015 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, meets core content policies. Hook cited to RS, but I'm concerned that the hook makes it sound like he literally never held a baseball bat during his entire career. Perhaps ALT1: ... that Kenichi Marumo once scored a run for the Orix Buffaloes baseball team despite not appearing at the plate? --Jakob (talk) aka Jakec 19:15, 22 October 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review Template:U. I don't know how familiar you are with baseball, but it is not unusual for a pinch runner to score without appearing at the plate. Also, if "once" is added, then to me it sounds like it was one of many that he scored.
- What if "first-team" and "never" were added to make it more specific?
- ALT2: ...... that Kenichi Marumo scored a run for the Orix Buffaloes first team despite never appearing at the plate?
- AtHomeIn神戸 (talk) 00:27, 23 October 2015 (UTC)