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::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, well referenced, neutrally written, no close paraphrasing seen. I moved the page to [[Murder of Palmira Silva]] to align with similar pages. QPQ done. The hooks are all verified and cited inline, but most are rather mundane and too long. What do you think about shortening the most interesting one, as follows: | ::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, well referenced, neutrally written, no close paraphrasing seen. I moved the page to [[Murder of Palmira Silva]] to align with similar pages. QPQ done. The hooks are all verified and cited inline, but most are rather mundane and too long. What do you think about shortening the most interesting one, as follows: | ||
::*'''ALT5''': ... that Nicholas Salvador '''[[Murder of Palmira Silva|beheaded Palmira Silva]]''' because he believed her to be a reincarnation of [[Adolf Hitler]]? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:07, 10 August 2015 (UTC) | ::*'''ALT5''': ... that Nicholas Salvador '''[[Murder of Palmira Silva|beheaded Palmira Silva]]''' because he believed her to be a reincarnation of [[Adolf Hitler]]? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:07, 10 August 2015 (UTC) | ||
+ | :::*Obviously, I can't review my own hook. I know that "Hitler sells", but this hook could cause unnecessary anguish for the Silva family, as it is not made clear that Salvador was suffering from severe delusional illness [[User:The Almightey Drill|'''tAD''']] ([[User talk:The Almightey Drill|talk]]) 23:42, 10 August 2015 (UTC) | ||
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Killing of Palmira Silva
- ... that paranoid schizophrenic Nicholas Salvador was found not guilty of murder in the killing of Palmira Silva, by reason of insanity?
- Reviewed: John Fitzpatrick (footballer)
Created by The Almightey Drill (talk). Self-nominated at 01:26, 25 July 2015 (UTC).
- ALT1: ... that after found not guilty of murder in the killing of Palmira Silva by reason of insanity, paranoid schizophrenic Nicholas Salvador was ordered to remain indefinitely in Broadmoor Hospital?
- ALT2: ... that after found not guilty of murder in the killing of Palmira Silva by reason of insanity, perpetrator Nicholas Salvador was ordered to remain indefinitely in Broadmoor Hospital?
- ALT3: ... that although perpetrator Nicholas Salvador admitted killing Palmira Silva for believing her to be reincarnation of Adolf Hitler, he was found not guilty of murder by reason of insanity?
- ALT4: ... that although perpetrator Nicholas Salvador admitted killing Palmira Silva, he was found not guilty of murder by reason of insanity but ordered to remain indefinitely in Broadmoor Hospital?
New enough, long enough, well referenced, neutrally written, no close paraphrasing seen. I moved the page to Murder of Palmira Silva to align with similar pages. QPQ done. The hooks are all verified and cited inline, but most are rather mundane and too long. What do you think about shortening the most interesting one, as follows:
- ALT5: ... that Nicholas Salvador beheaded Palmira Silva because he believed her to be a reincarnation of Adolf Hitler? Yoninah (talk) 23:07, 10 August 2015 (UTC)