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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] - article is long enough (barely) and new enough, and the hook is semi-interesting and within policy/sourced. However, the overall quality of the article needs to be improved. We frown upon short paragraphs, especially one sentence paragraphs/sections. Plus, when did he die (article is inconsistent) and it should be sourced. There is also a need for additional categories. The [[WP:LEAD|lead section]] should also be expanded. [[User:Aboutmovies|Aboutmovies]] ([[User talk:Aboutmovies|talk]]) 09:33, 1 January 2014 (UTC) | :*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] - article is long enough (barely) and new enough, and the hook is semi-interesting and within policy/sourced. However, the overall quality of the article needs to be improved. We frown upon short paragraphs, especially one sentence paragraphs/sections. Plus, when did he die (article is inconsistent) and it should be sourced. There is also a need for additional categories. The [[WP:LEAD|lead section]] should also be expanded. [[User:Aboutmovies|Aboutmovies]] ([[User talk:Aboutmovies|talk]]) 09:33, 1 January 2014 (UTC) | ||
::*I have edited the article in response to your concerns. '''<span style="color:blue;">069952497a</span>''' <small>''([[User:069952497a|U]]-[[User talk:069952497a|T]]-[[Special:Contributions/069952497a|C]]-[[Special:EmailUser/069952497a|E]])''</small> 15:10, 2 January 2014 (UTC) | ::*I have edited the article in response to your concerns. '''<span style="color:blue;">069952497a</span>''' <small>''([[User:069952497a|U]]-[[User talk:069952497a|T]]-[[Special:Contributions/069952497a|C]]-[[Special:EmailUser/069952497a|E]])''</small> 15:10, 2 January 2014 (UTC) | ||
| + | :::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] - all good to go now with those improvements. [[User:Aboutmovies|Aboutmovies]] ([[User talk:Aboutmovies|talk]]) 19:14, 2 January 2014 (UTC) | ||
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Kim Chol-man
- ... that Kim Chol-man pioneered North Korea's munitions industry, the country's economic base?
Created by 069952497a (talk). Self nominated at 15:49, 31 December 2013 (UTC).
- article is long enough (barely) and new enough, and the hook is semi-interesting and within policy/sourced. However, the overall quality of the article needs to be improved. We frown upon short paragraphs, especially one sentence paragraphs/sections. Plus, when did he die (article is inconsistent) and it should be sourced. There is also a need for additional categories. The lead section should also be expanded. Aboutmovies (talk) 09:33, 1 January 2014 (UTC)