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The result was: '''promoted''' by ''[[User: Allen3|Allen3]]''&nbsp;<sup>[[User talk:Allen3|talk]]</sup> 19:10, 3 January 2014 (UTC)<br />}}
 
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* ... that '''[[Kim Chol-man]]''' pioneered [[North Korea]]'s munitions industry, the country's economic base?
 
* ... that '''[[Kim Chol-man]]''' pioneered [[North Korea]]'s munitions industry, the country's economic base?
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:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Stefan Vladislav of Serbia]]
 
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<small>Created by [[User:069952497a|069952497a]] ([[User talk:069952497a|talk]]).&nbsp;Self nominated at 15:49, 31 December 2013 (UTC)</small>.
 
<small>Created by [[User:069952497a|069952497a]] ([[User talk:069952497a|talk]]).&nbsp;Self nominated at 15:49, 31 December 2013 (UTC)</small>.
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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] - article is long enough (barely) and new enough, and the hook is semi-interesting and within policy/sourced. However, the overall quality of the article needs to be improved. We frown upon short paragraphs, especially one sentence paragraphs/sections. Plus, when did he die (article is inconsistent) and it should be sourced. There is also a need for additional categories. The [[WP:LEAD|lead section]] should also be expanded. [[User:Aboutmovies|Aboutmovies]] ([[User talk:Aboutmovies|talk]]) 09:33, 1 January 2014 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] - article is long enough (barely) and new enough, and the hook is semi-interesting and within policy/sourced. However, the overall quality of the article needs to be improved. We frown upon short paragraphs, especially one sentence paragraphs/sections. Plus, when did he die (article is inconsistent) and it should be sourced. There is also a need for additional categories. The [[WP:LEAD|lead section]] should also be expanded. [[User:Aboutmovies|Aboutmovies]] ([[User talk:Aboutmovies|talk]]) 09:33, 1 January 2014 (UTC)
 
::*I have edited the article in response to your concerns. '''<span style="color:blue;">069952497a</span>''' <small>''([[User:069952497a|U]]-[[User talk:069952497a|T]]-[[Special:Contributions/069952497a|C]]-[[Special:EmailUser/069952497a|E]])''</small> 15:10, 2 January 2014 (UTC)
 
::*I have edited the article in response to your concerns. '''<span style="color:blue;">069952497a</span>''' <small>''([[User:069952497a|U]]-[[User talk:069952497a|T]]-[[Special:Contributions/069952497a|C]]-[[Special:EmailUser/069952497a|E]])''</small> 15:10, 2 January 2014 (UTC)
:::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] - all good to go now with those improvements. [[User:Aboutmovies|Aboutmovies]] ([[User talk:Aboutmovies|talk]]) 19:14, 2 January 2014 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 19:10, 3 January 2014

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 19:10, 3 January 2014 (UTC)

Kim Chol-man

Created by 069952497a (talk). Self nominated at 15:49, 31 December 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg - article is long enough (barely) and new enough, and the hook is semi-interesting and within policy/sourced. However, the overall quality of the article needs to be improved. We frown upon short paragraphs, especially one sentence paragraphs/sections. Plus, when did he die (article is inconsistent) and it should be sourced. There is also a need for additional categories. The lead section should also be expanded. Aboutmovies (talk) 09:33, 1 January 2014 (UTC)
  • I have edited the article in response to your concerns. 069952497a (U-T-C-E) 15:10, 2 January 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg - all good to go now with those improvements. Aboutmovies (talk) 19:14, 2 January 2014 (UTC)