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* ... that New York City's '''[[Kings Plaza]]''' shopping mall was built with a marina for visitors, as well as its own power system? <small>Source: [http://fultonhistory.com/highlighter/highlight-for-xml?altUrl=http%3A%2F%2Ffultonhistory.com%2FNewspapers%252023%2FBrooklyn%2520%2520NY%2520Daily%2FBrooklyn%2520%2520NY%2520Daily%25201961%2FBrooklyn%2520%2520NY%2520Daily%25201961%2520-%25200573.pdf Brooklyn Daily 1], [http://fultonhistory.com/highlighter/highlight-for-xml?altUrl=http%3A%2F%2Ffultonhistory.com%2FNewspapers%252023%2FBrooklyn%2520NY%2520New%2520York%2520%26%2520Brooklyn%2520Daily%2FBrooklyn%2520NY%2520New%2520York%2520%26%2520Brooklyn%2520Daily%25201970%2FBrooklyn%2520NY%2520New%2520York%2520%26%2520Brooklyn%2520Daily%25201970%2520-%25202566.pdf Brooklyn Daily 2]</small>
 
* ... that New York City's '''[[Kings Plaza]]''' shopping mall was built with a marina for visitors, as well as its own power system? <small>Source: [http://fultonhistory.com/highlighter/highlight-for-xml?altUrl=http%3A%2F%2Ffultonhistory.com%2FNewspapers%252023%2FBrooklyn%2520%2520NY%2520Daily%2FBrooklyn%2520%2520NY%2520Daily%25201961%2FBrooklyn%2520%2520NY%2520Daily%25201961%2520-%25200573.pdf Brooklyn Daily 1], [http://fultonhistory.com/highlighter/highlight-for-xml?altUrl=http%3A%2F%2Ffultonhistory.com%2FNewspapers%252023%2FBrooklyn%2520NY%2520New%2520York%2520%26%2520Brooklyn%2520Daily%2FBrooklyn%2520NY%2520New%2520York%2520%26%2520Brooklyn%2520Daily%25201970%2FBrooklyn%2520NY%2520New%2520York%2520%26%2520Brooklyn%2520Daily%25201970%2520-%25202566.pdf Brooklyn Daily 2]</small>
** '''ALT1''':... that teenagers were temporarily banned from New York City's '''[[Kings Plaza]]''' shopping mall in 2013? <small>Source: [https://newyork.cbslocal.com/2013/12/27/mob-of-teens-cause-disturbance-at-kings-plaza-mall/ CBS news]</small>
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** '''ALT1''':... that unaccompanied teenagers were temporarily banned from New York City's '''[[Kings Plaza]]''' shopping mall in 2013? <small>Source: [https://newyork.cbslocal.com/2013/12/27/mob-of-teens-cause-disturbance-at-kings-plaza-mall/ CBS news]</small>
:* ''Reviewed'': QPQ pending
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:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Deng Hongkui|Template:Did you know nominations/Deng Hongkui: Deng Hongkui]]
 
<small>Improved to Good Article status by [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) and [[User:Tdorante10|Tdorante10]] ([[User talk:Tdorante10|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) at 03:33, 28 September 2019 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Improved to Good Article status by [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) and [[User:Tdorante10|Tdorante10]] ([[User talk:Tdorante10|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Epicgenius|Epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) at 03:33, 28 September 2019 (UTC).</small>
 
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Epicgenius}} Another very well researched NYC article! Recent GA, long enough, well referenced, and no obvious close paraphrasing from Earwig or a spot-check of non-text sources. For the first hook, the URL for the reference supporting the power system ([http://fultonhistory.com/highlighter/highlight-for-xml?altUrl=http%3A%2F%2Ffultonhistory.com%2FNewspapers%252023%2FBrooklyn%2520NY%2520New%2520York%2520%26%2520Brooklyn%2520Daily%2FBrooklyn%2520NY%2520New%2520York%2520%26%2520Brooklyn%2520Daily%25201970%2FBrooklyn%2520NY%2520New%2520York%2520%26%2520Brooklyn%2520Daily%25201970%2520-%25202566.pdf]) appears to be dead; can you replace it? For the second hook, I think it would be more accurate to say "unaccompanied teenagers" for accuracy as reflected in the article and the source. Also waiting on a QPQ. [[User:97198|97198]] ([[User talk:97198|talk]]) 09:15, 28 September 2019 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{ping|Epicgenius}} Another very well researched NYC article! Recent GA, long enough, well referenced, and no obvious close paraphrasing from Earwig or a spot-check of non-text sources. For the first hook, the URL for the reference supporting the power system ([http://fultonhistory.com/highlighter/highlight-for-xml?altUrl=http%3A%2F%2Ffultonhistory.com%2FNewspapers%252023%2FBrooklyn%2520NY%2520New%2520York%2520%26%2520Brooklyn%2520Daily%2FBrooklyn%2520NY%2520New%2520York%2520%26%2520Brooklyn%2520Daily%25201970%2FBrooklyn%2520NY%2520New%2520York%2520%26%2520Brooklyn%2520Daily%25201970%2520-%25202566.pdf]) appears to be dead; can you replace it? For the second hook, I think it would be more accurate to say "unaccompanied teenagers" for accuracy as reflected in the article and the source. Also waiting on a QPQ. [[User:97198|97198]] ([[User talk:97198|talk]]) 09:15, 28 September 2019 (UTC)
 
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::*{{re|97198}} Thanks for the review. For the first hook I revised the sources to use the source PDF directly, rather than a viewer, which was causing the dead links. For the second hook I added unaccompanied teenagers. [[User:Epicgenius|epicgenius]] ([[User talk:Epicgenius|talk]]) 14:10, 28 September 2019 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 14:10, 28 September 2019

Kings Plaza

Improved to Good Article status by Epicgenius (talk) and Tdorante10 (talk). Nominated by Epicgenius (talk) at 03:33, 28 September 2019 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Template:Ping Another very well researched NYC article! Recent GA, long enough, well referenced, and no obvious close paraphrasing from Earwig or a spot-check of non-text sources. For the first hook, the URL for the reference supporting the power system ([1]) appears to be dead; can you replace it? For the second hook, I think it would be more accurate to say "unaccompanied teenagers" for accuracy as reflected in the article and the source. Also waiting on a QPQ. 97198 (talk) 09:15, 28 September 2019 (UTC)
  • Template:Re Thanks for the review. For the first hook I revised the sources to use the source PDF directly, rather than a viewer, which was causing the dead links. For the second hook I added unaccompanied teenagers. epicgenius (talk) 14:10, 28 September 2019 (UTC)