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:* Prose expanded five times, nominated within 7 days, has over 1500 characters, appears neutral, has multiple RSs and citations, no apparent copyvios, etc. No problems with the hook: interesting, decently neutral, and cited. QPQ is good; image N/A. Looks good.--[[User:Ɱ|<span style="text-shadow:#BBBBBB 0.1em 0.1em 0.1em; class=texhtml"><font color="darkgreen">'''ɱ'''</font></span>]] [[User talk:Ɱ|<font color="darkgreen">(talk</font>]] · [[User:Ɱ/Briarcliff Manor|<font color="darkgreen">vbm)</font>]] 20:48, 11 December 2014 (UTC) | :* Prose expanded five times, nominated within 7 days, has over 1500 characters, appears neutral, has multiple RSs and citations, no apparent copyvios, etc. No problems with the hook: interesting, decently neutral, and cited. QPQ is good; image N/A. Looks good.--[[User:Ɱ|<span style="text-shadow:#BBBBBB 0.1em 0.1em 0.1em; class=texhtml"><font color="darkgreen">'''ɱ'''</font></span>]] [[User talk:Ɱ|<font color="darkgreen">(talk</font>]] · [[User:Ɱ/Briarcliff Manor|<font color="darkgreen">vbm)</font>]] 20:48, 11 December 2014 (UTC) | ||
:::@[[User:Ɱ]]: Thank you for a quick review. I was wondering whether ALT1 hook would be more fun, see below. --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]|[[User talk:Piotrus|<font style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</font>]]</sub> 04:55, 12 December 2014 (UTC) | :::@[[User:Ɱ]]: Thank you for a quick review. I was wondering whether ALT1 hook would be more fun, see below. --<sub style="border:1px solid #228B22;padding:1px;">[[User:Piotrus|Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus]]|[[User talk:Piotrus|<font style="color:#7CFC00;background:#006400;"> reply here</font>]]</sub> 04:55, 12 December 2014 (UTC) | ||
| − | ALT1: * ... that '''''[[Kolejka (game)|Kolejka]]''''', a popular Polish educational board game about shortages in the communist [[shortage economy]], has suffered from shortages itself? | + | '''ALT1:''' * ... that '''''[[Kolejka (game)|Kolejka]]''''', a popular Polish educational board game about shortages in the communist [[shortage economy]], has suffered from shortages itself? |
::::Also looks good. I wish there was an easy way to indicate that the game's shortage was in availability, but I can't think of a good concise way. It's not very necessary; ALT1 works fine as it is.--[[User:Ɱ|<span style="text-shadow:#BBBBBB 0.1em 0.1em 0.1em; class=texhtml"><font color="darkgreen">'''ɱ'''</font></span>]] [[User talk:Ɱ|<font color="darkgreen">(talk</font>]] · [[User:Ɱ/Briarcliff Manor|<font color="darkgreen">vbm)</font>]] 05:11, 12 December 2014 (UTC) | ::::Also looks good. I wish there was an easy way to indicate that the game's shortage was in availability, but I can't think of a good concise way. It's not very necessary; ALT1 works fine as it is.--[[User:Ɱ|<span style="text-shadow:#BBBBBB 0.1em 0.1em 0.1em; class=texhtml"><font color="darkgreen">'''ɱ'''</font></span>]] [[User talk:Ɱ|<font color="darkgreen">(talk</font>]] · [[User:Ɱ/Briarcliff Manor|<font color="darkgreen">vbm)</font>]] 05:11, 12 December 2014 (UTC) | ||
| + | :: '''ALT2:''' ... that '''''[[Kolejka (game)|Kolejka]]''''', a popular Polish educational board game about shortages in the communist [[shortage economy]], has itself been in short supply? | ||
| + | :: Suggested ALT2 above.[[User:Georgejdorner|Georgejdorner]] ([[User talk:Georgejdorner|talk]]) 15:47, 14 December 2014 (UTC) | ||
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Kolejka (game)
- ... that Kolejka, one of the most popular Polish board games, is designed to educate people about the realities of the communist shortage economy?
- Reviewed: The 4 Percent Universe
5x expanded by Piotrus (talk). Self nominated at 09:45, 11 December 2014 (UTC).
- Prose expanded five times, nominated within 7 days, has over 1500 characters, appears neutral, has multiple RSs and citations, no apparent copyvios, etc. No problems with the hook: interesting, decently neutral, and cited. QPQ is good; image N/A. Looks good.--ɱ (talk · vbm) 20:48, 11 December 2014 (UTC)
- @User:Ɱ: Thank you for a quick review. I was wondering whether ALT1 hook would be more fun, see below. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:55, 12 December 2014 (UTC)
ALT1: * ... that Kolejka, a popular Polish educational board game about shortages in the communist shortage economy, has suffered from shortages itself?
- ALT2: ... that Kolejka, a popular Polish educational board game about shortages in the communist shortage economy, has itself been in short supply?
- Suggested ALT2 above.Georgejdorner (talk) 15:47, 14 December 2014 (UTC)