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* ... that [[Miss Utah]] 2015 '''[[Krissia Beatty]]''' is the fifth person in her family, including her mother, grandmother, and two aunts, to have been crowned Miss Washington County?
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* ... that [[Miss Utah]] 2015 '''[[Krissia Beatty]]''' is the fifth person in her family, after her mother, grandmother, and two aunts, to have been crowned Miss Washington County?
  
 
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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] looks good! I might change the hook to "after her mother, grandmother and two aunts". "including" reads a bit oddly. [[User:Ironholds|Ironholds]] ([[User talk:Ironholds|talk]]) 05:25, 30 July 2015 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] looks good! I might change the hook to "after her mother, grandmother and two aunts". "including" reads a bit oddly. [[User:Ironholds|Ironholds]] ([[User talk:Ironholds|talk]]) 05:25, 30 July 2015 (UTC)
 
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::*You're right, that is better. Changing it now. - [[User:Dravecky|Dravecky]] ([[User talk:Dravecky|talk]]) 07:00, 30 July 2015 (UTC)
 
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Krissia Beatty

  • ... that Miss Utah 2015 Krissia Beatty is the fifth person in her family, after her mother, grandmother, and two aunts, to have been crowned Miss Washington County?

Created by Dravecky (talk). Self-nominated at 20:44, 29 July 2015 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg looks good! I might change the hook to "after her mother, grandmother and two aunts". "including" reads a bit oddly. Ironholds (talk) 05:25, 30 July 2015 (UTC)
  • You're right, that is better. Changing it now. - Dravecky (talk) 07:00, 30 July 2015 (UTC)