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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:23, 9 January 2018 (UTC)<br />
 
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====Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie====
 
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* ... that '''[[Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie]]''' rejected the chance to be the head of [[Ghana Ports and Harbours Authority|Ghana's ports and harbours]] because of his [[Thalassophobia|fear of the sea]]?  <small>Source: [https://www.primenewsghana.com/general-news/my-persistent-fear-of-the-sea-made-me-reject-gpha-appointment-sir-john.html] and [https://yen.com.gh/90386-sir-john-claims-didnt-gpha-job-all.html#90386]</small>
 
* ... that '''[[Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie]]''' rejected the chance to be the head of [[Ghana Ports and Harbours Authority|Ghana's ports and harbours]] because of his [[Thalassophobia|fear of the sea]]?  <small>Source: [https://www.primenewsghana.com/general-news/my-persistent-fear-of-the-sea-made-me-reject-gpha-appointment-sir-john.html] and [https://yen.com.gh/90386-sir-john-claims-didnt-gpha-job-all.html#90386]</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that after '''[[Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie]]''' rejected the opportunity to head [[Ghana Ports and Harbours Authority|Ghana's seaports]] due to his [[Thalassophobia|fear of the sea]], he became the head of [[Forestry Commission (Ghana)|Forestry Commission]]?  <small>Source: [https://www.primenewsghana.com/general-news/my-persistent-fear-of-the-sea-made-me-reject-gpha-appointment-sir-john.html] and [https://yen.com.gh/90386-sir-john-claims-didnt-gpha-job-all.html#90386]</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that after '''[[Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie]]''' rejected the opportunity to head [[Ghana Ports and Harbours Authority|Ghana's seaports]] due to his [[Thalassophobia|fear of the sea]], he became the head of [[Forestry Commission (Ghana)|Forestry Commission]]?  <small>Source: [https://www.primenewsghana.com/general-news/my-persistent-fear-of-the-sea-made-me-reject-gpha-appointment-sir-john.html] and [https://yen.com.gh/90386-sir-john-claims-didnt-gpha-job-all.html#90386]</small>
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<small>Created by [[User:Crosstemplejay|Crosstemplejay]] ([[User talk:Crosstemplejay|talk]]). Self-nominated at 16:09, 18 December 2017 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Crosstemplejay|Crosstemplejay]] ([[User talk:Crosstemplejay|talk]]). Self-nominated at 16:09, 18 December 2017 (UTC).</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new enough, long enough, neutral, and well referenced. QPQ is done. I find the main hook very interesting. A couple of issues: 1. "fear of water" should be changed to "fear of the sea" per sources and article. They are related but not the same. 2. The sentence "direct criticism of the Supreme Court over its handling of the criminal contempt case involving the New Patriotic Party’s Sammy Awuku." is almost directly copied from the source. It needs to be paraphrased. -[[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]) 19:34, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new enough, long enough, neutral, and well referenced. QPQ is done. I find the main hook very interesting. A couple of issues: 1. "fear of water" should be changed to "fear of the sea" per sources and article. They are related but not the same. 2. The sentence "direct criticism of the Supreme Court over its handling of the criminal contempt case involving the New Patriotic Party’s Sammy Awuku." is almost directly copied from the source. It needs to be paraphrased. -[[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]) 19:34, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
 
::*{{u|Zanhe}}, looks like "fear of the water" has already been changed, and I've just rephrased the sentence you highlighted. Anything else needed? --[[User:Usernameunique|Usernameunique]] ([[User talk:Usernameunique|talk]]) 10:57, 26 December 2017 (UTC)
 
::*{{u|Zanhe}}, looks like "fear of the water" has already been changed, and I've just rephrased the sentence you highlighted. Anything else needed? --[[User:Usernameunique|Usernameunique]] ([[User talk:Usernameunique|talk]]) 10:57, 26 December 2017 (UTC)
 
:::*I've adjusted the original hook and ALT1 because they both used "fear of water" (they now say "fear of the sea"), and added "the opportunity" to ALT1, because "rejected to head" made no sense. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 21:30, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
 
:::*I've adjusted the original hook and ALT1 because they both used "fear of water" (they now say "fear of the sea"), and added "the opportunity" to ALT1, because "rejected to head" made no sense. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 21:30, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Article meets basic DYK requirements: it is new enough, long enough, QPQ, well-referenced (I've also expanded some of the references to include more dates and authors). The hooks are also referenced and included in the article. I did not look into ALT3 or ALT4 because no QPQ was provided for a second article. Preference for either ALT0 or ALT1, because I think ALT2 sounds pretty boring. <em><sup>[[User:FallingGravity|Falling]]</sup><sub>[[User talk:FallingGravity|Gravity]]</sub></em> 07:29, 9 January 2018 (UTC)
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*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Article meets basic DYK requirements: it is new enough, long enough, QPQ, well-referenced (I've also expanded some of the references to include more dates and authors). The hooks are also referenced and included in the article. I did not look into ALT3 or ALT4 because no QPQ was provided for a second article. Preference for either ALT0 or ALT1, because I think ALT2 sounds pretty boring. <em><sup>[[User:FallingGravity|Falling]]</sup><sub>[[User talk:FallingGravity|Gravity]]</sub></em> 07:29, 9 January 2018 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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Latest revision as of 21:23, 9 January 2018

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 21:23, 9 January 2018 (UTC)

Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie

Created by Crosstemplejay (talk). Self-nominated at 16:09, 18 December 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article is new enough, long enough, neutral, and well referenced. QPQ is done. I find the main hook very interesting. A couple of issues: 1. "fear of water" should be changed to "fear of the sea" per sources and article. They are related but not the same. 2. The sentence "direct criticism of the Supreme Court over its handling of the criminal contempt case involving the New Patriotic Party’s Sammy Awuku." is almost directly copied from the source. It needs to be paraphrased. -Zanhe (talk) 19:34, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
  • Template:U, looks like "fear of the water" has already been changed, and I've just rephrased the sentence you highlighted. Anything else needed? --Usernameunique (talk) 10:57, 26 December 2017 (UTC)
  • I've adjusted the original hook and ALT1 because they both used "fear of water" (they now say "fear of the sea"), and added "the opportunity" to ALT1, because "rejected to head" made no sense. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:30, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Article meets basic DYK requirements: it is new enough, long enough, QPQ, well-referenced (I've also expanded some of the references to include more dates and authors). The hooks are also referenced and included in the article. I did not look into ALT3 or ALT4 because no QPQ was provided for a second article. Preference for either ALT0 or ALT1, because I think ALT2 sounds pretty boring. FallingGravity 07:29, 9 January 2018 (UTC)