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====Le Sommeil==== | ====Le Sommeil==== | ||
{{DYK nompage links|nompage=Le Sommeil|Le Sommeil}} | {{DYK nompage links|nompage=Le Sommeil|Le Sommeil}} | ||
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[[File:Courbet Sleep.jpg|100x100px|Le Sommeil, painting by Gustave Courbet]] | [[File:Courbet Sleep.jpg|100x100px|Le Sommeil, painting by Gustave Courbet]] | ||
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{{*mp}}... that [[Gustave Courbet]]'s 1866 painting '''''[[Le Sommeil]]''''' ''(pictured)'' depicting [[lesbian]] relationship was inspired by [[Charles Baudelaire]]'s poem "Delphine et Hippolyte"? | {{*mp}}... that [[Gustave Courbet]]'s 1866 painting '''''[[Le Sommeil]]''''' ''(pictured)'' depicting [[lesbian]] relationship was inspired by [[Charles Baudelaire]]'s poem "Delphine et Hippolyte"? | ||
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<small>Created/expanded by [[User:SupernovaExplosion|SupernovaExplosion]] ([[User talk:SupernovaExplosion|talk]]). Self nom at 14:07, 17 February 2012 (UTC)</small> | <small>Created/expanded by [[User:SupernovaExplosion|SupernovaExplosion]] ([[User talk:SupernovaExplosion|talk]]). Self nom at 14:07, 17 February 2012 (UTC)</small> | ||
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:*I reviewed [[Template:Did you know nominations/Bruno Braquehais|Bruno Braquehais]], [[Template:Did you know nominations/Acacia reficiens|Acacia reficiens]], [[Template:Did you know nominations/Volunia|Volunia]] and [[Template:Did you know nominations/Greta Schiller|Greta Schiller]] --[[User:SupernovaExplosion|'''<span style="color: maroon;">Supernova</span><span style="color: DarkGreen;">Explosion</span>''']] [[User talk: SupernovaExplosion|'''<span style="color: Navy;"> <sup>Talk</sup></span>''']] 15:16, 17 February 2012 (UTC) | :*I reviewed [[Template:Did you know nominations/Bruno Braquehais|Bruno Braquehais]], [[Template:Did you know nominations/Acacia reficiens|Acacia reficiens]], [[Template:Did you know nominations/Volunia|Volunia]] and [[Template:Did you know nominations/Greta Schiller|Greta Schiller]] --[[User:SupernovaExplosion|'''<span style="color: maroon;">Supernova</span><span style="color: DarkGreen;">Explosion</span>''']] [[User talk: SupernovaExplosion|'''<span style="color: Navy;"> <sup>Talk</sup></span>''']] 15:16, 17 February 2012 (UTC) | ||
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::::: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Now definitely good to go '''''[[User:Moswento|Moswento]]''''' ([[User talk:Moswento|talk]] | [[Special:Contributions/Moswento|contribs]]) 13:23, 29 February 2012 (UTC) | ::::: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Now definitely good to go '''''[[User:Moswento|Moswento]]''''' ([[User talk:Moswento|talk]] | [[Special:Contributions/Moswento|contribs]]) 13:23, 29 February 2012 (UTC) | ||
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Revision as of 10:53, 2 March 2012
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 10:53, 2 March 2012 (UTC)
Le Sommeil
- ... that Gustave Courbet's 1866 painting Le Sommeil (pictured) depicting lesbian relationship was inspired by Charles Baudelaire's poem "Delphine et Hippolyte"?
Created/expanded by SupernovaExplosion (talk). Self nom at 14:07, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
- I reviewed Bruno Braquehais, Acacia reficiens, Volunia and Greta Schiller --SupernovaExplosion Talk 15:16, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
- The article was created by User:Dr. Blofeld, and expanded 5X by me. --SupernovaExplosion Talk 15:20, 17 February 2012 (UTC)
5x expansion confirmed, hook verified. References good, although it'd be good to get an inline ref for para 3, particularly the last sentence, and I was wondering if there was another way to say " soften the taboos" to distance it from the source without changing meaning.....Casliber (talk · contribs) 00:54, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
- Done. Removed the last sentence of the 3rd paragraph, added references for the rest of the 3rd paragraph. Changed "soften the taboos" to "lower the taboos". --SupernovaExplosion Talk 02:18, 18 February 2012 (UTC)
- Fixed a spelling error and a couple of style concerns, especially that paintings are usually described as being "in the collection of ..." and not as "collected in ..." The latter makes it sound like they somehow swept it up. :) Also, "extreme joy" is a bit energetic a description isn't it? Wouldn't "exhaustion" be better? The source uses "post-coital bliss" and this is the usual expression for this kind of lassitude. Whiteghost.ink 14:06, 19 February 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for your changes and suggestion. Changed "extreme joy" > exhaustion. --SupernovaExplosion Talk 15:39, 19 February 2012 (UTC)